anxiety--- we already had this going before you were in the crew, wicked clown added his part yesterday and i added ur name in my verse..... if u want a verse just type one up and post it in the cerw thread..... :thumbup: and red bull will edit it like he did for wicked clown

^ Most definetly will...

come on some proper feedback wud be appreciated.....verse for verse stuff

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

werd...this shit is fuckin dope. im uppin this shit, dont sleep on this, honest feed please

there was a forum up in the crew forum for abit....drop a verse in it...i'll edit the post :thumbup:

aight...anxiety....ya verse has been added....uppin this shit ...don't sleep yall

word...uppin for feedback

Upping.........

red bull
good verse u managed to name a lot of people and rhyme them along with keeping the flow intact a very good opener...

I.Mind
good kept shit goin and a good follow up to the introduction, nice vocab and i liked the multies

Premanition
this had the best vocab out of all parts in my opinion combined with multies excellent part...

kwell
wasnt feelin this as much as the first 3 but it still brought ya crew love and got the point through

ill-grammatix
it felt kind of the same as kwells sayin topicals,poetry etc. but it had a higher vocab and better multies

ill.logic
this was ok in my opinion nothing too good but the same as kwells got the point across and u still reppin ya crew to the fullest

chaos
eh...the metaphores seemed kind of weak along with the last bar but its ok none the less

phatmic
in my opinion had the best punchlines of all parts, they were raw and i just thought they were dope good flow and vocab too

lady fiya
this was good too had the most depth imo and nice wordplay...

wickedclown
this was my least liked part in the OM in my opinion no hate but i wasnt feelin it, the punches were weak and felt elementary and there was no vocab to back it up but still keep doin ya thang

anxiety
best flow of the OM, held that aspect down definately and i liked all the lines and last bar was a great bar to end the whole piece

overall it was great i enjoyed most of the parts and MAB's got their people in all categories and aspects good shit

peace

Red Bull's rhyme scheme is terrible..

Dynasty and emcee dont rhyme.
Skriptz and grammatix dont rhyme.
Resurection and perfection dont rhyme.

Syllable count son.. rhyming words have to have the same number of syllables..

Thats all i felt like reading..

..But dont inflate your egos to much now, kids..

feedback.......................................... ...

shut up bitch, sick of ur bull shit, ur ego is bigger than anyones n u never even battle just talk shit.....

thats all


uppin

ummmm... mine had no vocab? ummm read it again it was full of vocab... uhhhh sorry u feel that way.... uppin tho

WICKEDCLOWN
expose the mentality, makin people see MABs reality
murderin bitch made crews like Mortal Kombat fatalitys
^it was weak and mentality,reality,fatality is common...wen i say no vocab i mean like words that i dont see a lot

dropin rhymes dramaticly, increasin peeps losses fanaticly
shootin lyrical bullets imphaticly, bring RV to its knees
i liked imphaticaly and fanaticaly but these were the only non common words in the whole verse...the other people in the collab had more non common words

otha Emcees beggin us please, runnin, hidin in the trees
niggas must be retarded commin at Mind Above Body
no vocab

with bullshit loddy doddy, get blown away with a lyrical shotty
and sentanced to life like they name was john gotti
no vocab

leavin our mark forever on this game, we found the fame
so fuck what you heard and always remember our name...
no vocab

so there was only 2 words that i thought were unique vocab im not startin beef jus tellin it how i see it

peace