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Hypnotic 07-19-06 01:31 PM

Voted For: NotoriousM

Nice Battle
punches: Both
Personals: Grillz
Struc: Grillz
Flow: Grillz

Well Both Veses Were Nice But Grillz Take This, Had More Flow And Struc And Better Personals

GKillaz05 07-19-06 05:20 PM

Voted For: NotoriousM

..Grillz..:
When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../
Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...//
5/10 - Good Opener.
Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../
Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...//
3/10 - Meh.
Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../
Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...//
4/10 - OK.
Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../
Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...//
3/10 - ok Closer.
15/40

Clockwork:
Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV
I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie
4/10 - OK Opener.
My flow is sicker than animals at the vet
He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret
2/10 - NO.
This is your first performance...you actually showed up
Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up
3/10 - Flow was off. played.
Like police officers dis bitch has no clue
Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you
2/10 - Weak Closer.
11/40


WINNER: GRIlLZ

..Grillz.. 07-20-06 06:12 PM

niice...uppin..................................... .

Hypnotic 07-20-06 07:22 PM

Return Da Fav, In Sig!
Pz.........................

Clockwork 07-22-06 12:59 AM

uppin............................................. ...

..Grillz.. 07-25-06 12:18 AM

uppin
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In-Vision 07-26-06 03:32 AM

Voted For: NotoriousM

vote goes to grillz for having a more consistant verse..neither of you had any flow, good personals/punches..or anything...but grillz was consistantly better and he showed more of a knowledge of text battling.

..Grillz.. 07-27-06 03:37 AM

upppin need 1 vote.................................

Wordz AhGod 08-08-06 06:46 PM

Voted For: Clockwork

Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV
I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie
PLAYED

My flow is sicker than animals at the vet
He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret
DECENT LINE REALLY BUT WORDED POORLY

This is your first performance...you actually showed up
Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up
VERY PLAYED. I THINK THIS WAS MY 1ST PUNCH BACK IN 04' LOL.

Like police officers dis bitch has no clue
Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you
WAK CLOSER.

YOUR SHITS DECENT BUT YOU LACK CREATIVITY IN PUNCHES. YOUR STUCK IN THE 04 ERA MAN. TRY HARDER NEXT TIME.

When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../
Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...//
WAK

Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../
Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...//
SUPER WAK

Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../
Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...//
YOU DISSED YOUR SELF NOT HIM. WAK

Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../
Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...//
WAK AND SIMPLE

YOUR JUST ALL OUT WAK AND UNCREATIVE PLUS THE ...// OFFENDS ME. THAT SHITS SSSSOOOO OLD SCHOOL IT AINT BEEN COOL SINCE RB AND RV WERE TRYING TO SPLIT UP.

BASICALLY iM GIVING THIS BATTLE TO CLOCK WORK COZ HIS LINES WERE PLAYED BUT WEREN'T BAD. GRILLZ HAD WAK ASS SIMPLE LINES WITH NO PUNCHES AND EVEN ENDED UP DISSING HIMSELF WICH IS REALLY RETARDED. RTF

V/CLOCKWORK

PS. YOU BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE.

..Grillz.. 08-15-06 12:05 AM

uppin.........need one last vote..............................

M Eazy 08-16-06 11:42 PM

Voted For: Clockwork

I give this one to Clockwork, simply because he had better/harder hitting personals...

No hate, this was a close battle, but Clockwork came wit it from start to finish.

Notorios-You had a nice verse dawg, but it was mad dull...boring my nig. You wasted yo first couple bars on his name. You cant do that and expect to win every battle. Matter fact, name play is old, so you should never start with that at least put it in tha middle of your verse. But overall, I felt you had a nice verse, nice personals that hit in tha right places, it was just boring. And also, your opener tells alot about ur battle. You first line seemed like it was guna be coo, but you lost it when you was finishing tha bar. You verse was boring, which allowed me to never really get into it. No hate, just a honest vote.

Clockwork-You had tha winning verse and took my vote, mainly because yo personals werent played, you dropped a personal and left it alone, and your verse wasnt dull. You had a nice opener that got me into your verse and you played it out throughout tha rest of tha verse. You didnt fall off. Nice shit, and nice verse.

Overall-this was a real close battle, but it came down to tha little things that clockwork did better that took my vote. I was feeling his verse way more.

No hate, just a honest vote..may tha best man take this battle.

-1-

..Grillz.. 08-17-06 11:44 PM

.................................................. ...........................bumpin'

Clockwork 08-22-06 06:03 PM

uppin 4 votz.............................................. ......................

Clockwork 08-23-06 08:42 PM

need somw votz...........................................upp in

Clockwork 08-24-06 11:15 AM

Uppin 4 votz...........................uppin.............. .....uppin


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