The whole beginning had lines that seemed recycled from other niggas.
For example:
oh, I'm back on the grind, slap a cat ewit the back of his nine,
cause he was talkin like he was out of his mind,
Rakim said damn near the exact same thing four years ago.
But the actual diss, that was pretty tight. Dope metas, nice flow/structure, wordplay was lovely. Keep it up.
Overall, nice drop. It could be better, but there were a few recycled lines in there.

ehh not a firm believer on the whole "crew killer' thing ..niggas act like they crews some type of gang that can kill anybody..blue print eh seen alot of whack niggas in that crew prolly got a handful of talent and hmm the "song" part of this was aight had its highs and lows ...the "diss keystyke?...Keystyle**" part of this was. ..well why did you make this as if it were an audio? why not make it an audio instead of having such chaos... but ....


come on this guy's 1-5, and he's as hard as it gets,
all votes on his open mic was from niggaz who's records was flat or either in debt,
^^?? gets n debt dont rhyme...but i guess it was a punch so yea

I couldve waited for you to talk more shit, but then again why wait,
couldnt see a merkin this bad, if Oj was wit a white woman on a blind date,
you dissed me and what, you expected to make the papers,
but all you did was show me I was hot enough to attract haters...


The first line was filler and boring..
the second line bout OJ was nice
The third line was decent
and the last line was nice..

for everything as a whole i'd rate the whole thing 6/10
for the song alone i'd rate it 7/10
for the diss 5/10

dat flow was mad nicew fareal n da punchlines kicked ass n ya ryhmes keep it goin lil long but worth tha tyme ta read