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anxiety 04-30-04 01:09 AM

OK... Accomp. Basically, the verse i expect from you. Good lines, packed with punches, a few personals, and uneven lines. If u fixed ur structure u may be unstopable kid, good verse. Afterword... Basically, the beggining of ur verse was dope, and then it fell off... I like how u made fun of Accomps. frequent crew hopping lately, but u never left it alone. That was the only good thing u said the entire time.
My vote goes to accomp. for consistency.

p.s. their are like 7 or 8 good emcee's left that arent in MM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121514

^ and hit that up

accomplishment 04-30-04 03:05 PM

yo uppp for votes... dont be sleepin bizzithces....

BigTony.Self 04-30-04 03:06 PM

had better word play for mat was good bothsides but puches go to acc..................return the favor check out some of Tonyself SO I CAN CLOSE EM OUT

accomplishment 04-30-04 04:22 PM

upppin yo...........

Killah Bwoy 04-30-04 04:36 PM

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwlmfao afterword wtf was that..i think that was wack sorry dawg...i was not feelin' dat shit at all fo real...but you try so i give u that much but your shit was confusing and didnt make sense and was wack..accomplishment this was pretty good ive seen better but i was still feelin; dis...so i give this vote to ACC

plustwo 04-30-04 05:26 PM

aight imma drop an honest vote...

accomplishment:

opener: damnnnnnnn i thought dat shit was tight.

best line:crew like "get em"...i aint gonna fight her...waiten for a main-course...not this appitizer...
this kid despises me...its cuz i'm young...yet so much wiser.../

worst line: none

finisher:i thought that could do with a bit of improvement:

all in all i thought your flow was pretty tight u rhymed well n had some good punches...

15/20



afterword:

opener: not bad but couldav bin better

best line:you use to ryhme clas-sic, but it got drastic so u, fill-da-void quik
u got yur ass whipped, so fuck yur last clique, now u ridin killah bwoy's dick

worst line:you kant fuckin see me u weiney im a distant solar-system
after this yur fam will be grievin, like theres a U.S. soldier-missin

finisher: i didnt really feel that 1 really

all in all your spit was pretty good but you couldav improved a little bit.

13/20


i thought this battle was pretty close but my man accomplishment had that one

\\// peace \\//


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