Voted For: D523
ayo u got it.......rhymes where better and better punches.......simple.......and guess homie didnt have his mind and heart into it like he said Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanks for votin! uppin for some more votes
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uppin............................................. .
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Voted For: D523
Votin for D ight this battle was close on all accounts of the battle but i favored D's verse due to his creativity ight D Punches were creativen hard hittin strucutre was nice flow was good and easy to keep wit wordplay was creative multies- didnt see any elevate on those Personals- Creative n hard hittin ur bes line: Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch" (lol made me cuckle nice n creative) One ight ya had hard punches but some were a lil basic try to get a lil more creative on them structure was nice n easy to stay wit flow was nice n easy as well multies- I didnt see any elevate on those personals didnt see any man elevate on them both elevate on multies D had hard punches n a few hard hittin personals one ya didnt throw any personals so it made me turn away from your verse damn good battle from the both of you but the votes goes to D for creative punches and personals BE SURE TO RTF!! link below sig holla |
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
ey yo man i had to give it to ONESTEP juss cause his whole verse flowed betta and he had betta shit all da way dawg..... wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls, M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes, i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s, cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex... ey dawg dat shit was funny as hell....haha.....D....u had some nice punches but ya structa was weak dawg..no hate....and check yo p.m's boy i been tryin to battle yo ass.....no hate ....holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i know kid lol i said set it up
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
i wanna know one thing...
your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see, cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me, is that true? you were the only one to reply to his open mic? |
oh sorry...i thought i could vote after i left feedback
well i was going to vote for: OneStepBeyond |
Yes it was true...................................
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:: bump :: :) cmon vote on this shit
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<-Tired of gettin robbed out of wins. Just fucking vote.
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Voted For: D523
Pretty weak battle but i think d523 got this one...osb just came wack ... nothing much to say about this could have been alot better D523 Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs Decent Opener Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch" Could have been alot better Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision Nice punch good multies You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie pretty cool , nice meta We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity LOL Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it Nice closer , but alittle self glorious OSB plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college, thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish, Weak Opener doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches, got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES, WHat?! your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see, cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me, okay personal your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug, and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up, NO, wack wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls, M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes, Nice , best line in your verse i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s, cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex... decent closer Overall D523 got this he came with harder punchlines , Osb just came played and weak , if osb came harder, he would have one this battle , but ima have to to hand this one to d523 ... keep it up and elevate both |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
I think OSB's punches were more affective. I think his hit harder. I liked the diss's in this battle, and the structure is on point for OSB. D523, your flow was wayy off. Esp, at the bigging. But, I was feelin OSB's punches and concepts more, adding his wordplay to that list, so I felt he took this one. Not really a close battle to me, i think OSB took it. D523 didnt really have too many hard hitting punches, and is personals were kinda off. Well, I tried my best to explain this. Pretty much nothing more to say except OSB's concepts, consistency, and punches took my vote. ~1~ |
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