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damnit nigga..you beat my open mic..I admit it..
Bla..I'ma make one to beat this... it was sick man.nothin wrong with it..AT all..damn.. 10/10 hoe |
go look at my "not you" no link sorry
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imagery was great................flow was on point and structure was also damn good........i really like tha vocab and emotion.....i really liked how you stayed on topic.......most cats get off point...........this was a very good drop
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nice drop fam....thats def the Open mic of the month of nov. even though its the first one ive read of this site...it was good...very good..
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This was pretty good. I dunno if its just me, but I sort of got an image in my head of a rich beverly hills type beachside community and a man parked outside in an expensive sports car fuming about losing his ex wife..
It was really good how you started on your topic from a very early part of the peice with this line: "Constantly parked parallel to entrance of house in question…" As soon as I read that, I knew exactly what this whole thing was about. And its probably what kept me interested throughout the rest of the peice. Good shit bro.. |
wow, this is unbelievably good, like your imagery man, and yea poet ^, i kinda got the same idea, the imagery wow, that was just great, i swear, if we we're in a topical battle, you would of killed me! lol, but yea, the vocab was excellent, n multi's needed at all, that actually would of ruined it. I'm very impressed, thanx to this O.M., people will show the capability of what our crew can do! :),
9.8/10 much prop's!! Damn, now i got competition *signs off, goes to notebook, thinks of what to write even better* ;) |
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Damn Prem...
Nice Emotion ThroughOut...Good Use of Vocabulary and The Rhyme Scheme Was Nice. This Is Probably The Best Open Mic I've Read (Well Except For Mine :-D lol) Tight Shit Man...Keep It Up... ~R~ |
Lovin it mayne, this is tha most touching poem...*tear* *sniff*, lost myself 4 a minute, ne wayz, good use of imagery!!! Very creative and your last line was 1 of tha best closers I seen on an OM. Keep it up bro, true potential!
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I Was Feeling This Piece...
The Emotion And Content Were All There... And The Piece Had A Nice Smooth Flow That Alway Stayed Constant... I Always Said You Would Be Able To Be A Nice Topical Head... Oviously While I Was Gone You Made The Leap To Do Just That... Very Nice Piece Overall With Really No Flaws... Only Thing I Could Complain About Is Its Length... But It's The Second Half Of Your Other Piece So When Together Its Prolly Right... Big Up Mayn, I Like What You're Doing... .One. |
GIVE HIM THE OPEN MIC AWARD GODDAMNIT... HE DESERVES IT YOU STINGY BASTARDS.. ROFL well he does.. uppin' this nice piece of work...
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Dope piece one of the better open mics ive read in awhile. Reminds me of a piece i didn in a topical tourney, nice emotion, feeling it..............
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besides my own...and b.i detained...and nostra.....this is the dopest open mic i've seen in a while...imagery was definately there....emotion was as on point as it could have possibly been....and a very well told story and ending...this definately has my vote for OM of the month
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this was dope...8.6/10...very dope good vocab and wordplay...tightness..weerdizzle...drop feed on me and indephes collab link in the sig
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