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The Jett 09-18-06 06:13 PM

blah. thats a pain in the balls.

K.ontroverz.Y 09-18-06 06:14 PM

tru just quote the post. and then say yes or no. thats what i used to do...

The Jett 09-18-06 06:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ace Heratoga
www.soundclick.com/chosenonesent

Da Struggle

flow is mad basic in the beggining lyrically a few wack lines in the beggining

2nd guy is alot better but theres an odd pause in the middle of the track

3rd guy voice is kind of aannoying flow gets a little choppy towards the en of your verse

4th verse probably the best verse
vote: no


I agree. NO. so much more could be done to this beat than what is here.

Paranoid 09-21-06 09:42 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235210

"It Makes No Difference ft. Troublesome & Prahject"

Thought this song was pretty ill for a new one from me so I decided it could probably get in.

first guy cool
para flow is choppy in places delivery is kinda lacking and its kinda hard to hear you vote: NO

Zone Out 09-25-06 02:03 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4480737
Bury Ya Face

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4480791
Prisoner

Vote on the first track no second track yes

Votes No for the first tracc, Yes For Second tracc

Paranoid 09-25-06 10:36 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235274

Bridge City ft. Yung Red

Zone Out 09-26-06 12:14 AM

yall wildin
the first track is hard as hell

Jay Rose 09-26-06 12:34 AM

will s unyu
bury ya face: NO - the flow was choppy a bit, just could follow it, it bored me a bit....just didnt like it really

prisoner: MAYBE - it was a good track i guess, i dont feel the beat that much....so yea its up to you

paranoid
bridge city:NO - no beef in this. you sound too seperated from the beat. like i dont even think your on it, the lyics have they own tune n it doesnt match well with the beat...the second guy is choppy at best....a positive is your starting to sound a lil more smooth then usual...but still no

Willa 09-26-06 12:59 AM

so thats a yes on wills second track

Zone Out 09-26-06 02:08 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Default
will s unyu
bury ya face: NO - the flow was choppy a bit, just could follow it, it bored me a bit....just didnt like it really

prisoner: MAYBE - it was a good track i guess, i dont feel the beat that much....so yea its up to you

paranoid
bridge city:NO - no beef in this. you sound too seperated from the beat. like i dont even think your on it, the lyics have they own tune n it doesnt match well with the beat...the second guy is choppy at best....a positive is your starting to sound a lil more smooth then usual...but still no

alright, so Prisoner is on there

but Default, where exactly was my flow choppy at in Bury ya Face

Jay Rose 09-26-06 02:52 AM

around the concious...pay me homage doesnt quite fit. freaks ta..the pause doesnt fit right...and a ni99a hype ...its not so much that it sounds choppy but it sounds like your runnin out of breath n it brings it down. paper cut line isnt as smooth as it should be....a bunch of little subtle things like that.....thas what i was sayin

M&rk 10-11-06 12:30 AM

Klub... Big Picture and Yvonne
at the top Klubs the name ft. yvonne... werd get back at me

Yvonne 10-12-06 05:20 PM

Get It Popping ft Wordz AhGod

Chevy Slut Ft J Summers and Breezy


..both werent iight but we've updated them!..


Holla Back


...^click there!

Blackmage 11-06-06 06:24 AM

Once you go black. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=303064

Just thought it was one of my better produced tracks. My equips garbo so it's not my favorite track but it's the clearest. Check it out though thanks. Trying to keep the movement going.

bhamrome 11-17-06 12:15 AM

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