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FlowIntelligent. 11-30-04 09:11 PM

Voted For: Mike Hawk



Kontroversey:

Dayum Mikes Sick, I think He just might equal up to -Ice Ice Baby!-.
This kid Has majour Problems With "mikes" like chka chka slim shady.
^^umm no kinda wack 4/10
Kid Tried Multiple Times to be on the RV spotlight,
..........................................But the light Always Faded.
I guess That's God Way of Saying " YOU WACK ",
..........................................Your Way!! over-rated.
^^haha good shit 7/10
Vet Status? NOPE, This Kid "falls For Herbs" like them jack & the beanstalk tales.
This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups,
............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery.
I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed,
...................................and you were wanted for burglery.
^^lmao good shit but stretched as fuck minus 2 points 6/10
Merk You back to the past time, deduct your win record, like .
Punchlines Will Decrease your heart rate like old men on push bikes.
^^ wasnt feeling this 4/10

You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's,
.................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard.
The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health,
.........................................Like backs of Variety Stores.
^^stop stretching shit it makes you lose 4/10

overall : 25/50 (50%)

Mike hawk:

This fag needs to be schooled, or removed from life
Look at his sig, name, crews...he can't spell shit right
^^lmao dope opener weak set up 7/10
Bitch think he standin tall, we all know he frontin
The fag disses text, but 100 of his battles came from it
^^ decent personal good punch 6/10
Nobody likes yo ass, and you know that, that's a fact
You got Cam prayin for wackass knotroverzey not to come back
^^ lol 6/10
If anybody ever gave u respect, the fag just abused it
So now Bush want gun control to stop Four Clips from makin wack music
^^dopest bar in the battle 9/10
Nobody cares wutchu think...faggot ur jus too gay
and why u sayin ur back..bitch was gone for wut..2 days?
^^ good closer and dope personal 7/10

overall : 35/50 (70%)

vote mike hawk

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1773569

Drop an honest vote on this battle please

Pop Lotty 12-01-04 03:15 PM

I'll get to votin sometime......................................

Pop Lotty 12-03-04 05:36 PM

.......... .................. .........

Magic5 12-03-04 05:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Mike Hawk
 
Mike won..

But i guess im not supposed to vote on this battle..

Mike easily won though..

Better concepts, harder punches. better personals..

Killah's wasnt very good at all..

Pop Lotty 12-05-04 04:39 PM

.............uppin..

4Blood2Hound0 12-05-04 04:48 PM

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Mike Hawk took this..

I could actually read his verse without getting bored. Your structure was alright but u had some streched lines. I say you got this cuz it made me laugh and i didn't get bored.

Other cats was just boring... Kinda played punches. You could have had some of them hitting way harder and your structure was kinda wierd..

Vote-Mike Hawk

RTF- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163144

Zeke 12-05-04 04:51 PM

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Mike Hawk:
Alright I Like How The Verse Just Flowed Out...Nice Work..Vocabulary Was Decent And Neat Saw Some Good Words In There...Personals Of Hand Nice...A Little Word In There Over All Vocabulary And Punches Was Nice I Just Didnt Feel The Structure..Although It Was Better Then You Opponents.....8.5/10

Killa:
Okay It Sort Of FLowed Out Good To But Your Structure Wasnt Working On This One Also You Had Lot Of Basic Vocabulary In THis Verse..I Know You Can Do Better Then That Hommie...Punches Was Neat Creative...Used A Little WordPlay...Nice Shit OverAll Your Structure And Vocabulary Held You Back On This One Cozz......8/10

Vote=Mike Hawk
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Pop Lotty 12-06-04 07:12 PM

www.uppinthisbattle.com.

Abraxas 12-06-04 09:34 PM

Voted For: Mike Hawk

damn .......
Mike Hawk: ok im telling it stright up... your not that good..... in fact....your really.. overrated....but damn man... you fucking had a very tite ass verse.. man!! LOL im first off

This fag needs to be schooled, or removed from life
Look at his sig, name, crews...he can't spell shit right
that was a ok opening
Bitch think he standin tall, we all know he frontin
The fag disses text, but 100 of his battles came from it
weak
Nobody likes yo ass, and you know that, that's a fact
You got Cam prayin for wackass knotroverzey not to come back
hahahah nice one
If anybody ever gave u respect, the fag just abused it
So now Bush want gun control to stop Four Clips from makin wack music
nice punch and was strong
Nobody cares wutchu think...faggot ur jus too gay
and why u sayin ur back..bitch was gone for wut..2 days?
this wawas good... got it in the LMAO factor

Kid Tried Multiple Times to be on the RV spotlight,
..........................................But the light Always Faded.
I guess That's God Way of Saying " YOU WACK ",
..........................................Your Way!! over-rated.
WTF... that flow was goodbut naw... this was wtf
Vet Status? NOPE, This Kid "falls For Herbs" like them jack & the beanstalk tales.
This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups,
............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery.
I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed,
...................................and you were wanted for burglery.
Merk You back to the past time, deduct your win record, like .
Punchlines Will Decrease your heart rate like old men on push bikes.

You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's,
.................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard.
The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health,
.........................................Like backs of Variety Stores.
blah i can even get through ya verse... to mixed up.. but yea ya did got some good punches....
blah....
MH/v

Pop Lotty 12-07-04 06:12 PM

upping............................................ ....

N.Tavarez 12-07-04 07:36 PM

Voted For: Mike Hawk

Bitch think he standin tall, we all know he frontin
The fag disses text, but 100 of his battles came from it
nope not really hard..but True..
Nobody cares wutchu think...faggot ur jus too gay
and why u sayin ur back..bitch was gone for wut..2 day
again ..not hard..but true..i expect more from u but i heard sometimes u slack off..

Kontra.....
This Kid enjoys testing Patience similar to Doctor Check-ups,
............They say Your doing good after the Plastic Surgery.
I knew You was pussy, When The Dildo Store was robbed,
...................................and you were wanted for burglery.
i see what u tried to do with this but it aint work sounds like a forced concept.........
You couldn't increase the temperature On your metaphore's,
.................. if you installed Oven-Timer On your keyboard.
The Shit this kid has To offer Lowers your health,
.........................................Like backs of Variety Stores
this shoulda been a hot closer...but something went wrong and it ended up being lame..whole verse is unorganized..forced...not really feelin it..

v/hawk......not his best but his personals were stronger than kontras punches


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