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Ya see , ya either . . 1.weak 2.laim or 3.dope , G
But ya must be 1 or 2 cos I`m already number 3 5...that don't work, self glorifyin...weak man!! i`m beating you down with ease . . & i'm imputing no such effort . . It's Sympathy ya called a vet . . or is it ya 36-4 record . . 6...betta but still pretty weak. Getting garden tools for herbs – really sucks . but it's a job When im on aim -L.I's always like "What do ya think of my lines dawg" 7...funny line, gettin betta!! Ya horrible with write's.. tripl n merked you , but ya know what's worse.. Making gay excuses like . ." it was a three minute no show verse" 7...another gud line, nice personal!! I’ll show no mercy & rip this cat . . so he can drop his best line . . This kid’s 14 on puberty . . so yeah L.I means little Intestines 6...pretty weak closer!! Thought you were a top head and considered somewhat a vet… Your own crew has awards and ur name aint even come up yet… 7...gud opener, nice personal!! Got ya the wish bone and u drawed the small end, all luck’s gone… Reason you have so many names, couldn’t decide what to suck on… 8...funny ass shit, nice personal!! Out of my league…our verses don’t even need to be compared… Quit the game cause like your avatar…your going no where… 6...naw, that was a pretty weak attempt at a personal. Used to like this kid…he’s been exposed and there his grip went… I mean what kind of herb makes an audio callout wit out equipment… 7...gud personal again, these are funny lines!! Just like ya custom text…your access to shine on this site’s been forbidden… Points startin to click that he sucks…cause he keeping his record hidden… 6...weak closer, played out concept!! POINTS TOTALS Soul Skriptz - 31/50 L.I. - 34/50 V/ - L.I. return tha favour and drop some honest votes on my two open battles the links to them are in my sig. |
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L.I. i like your verse better than Soul Skripts' b/c i think you spit facts.you came harder right out of the box. nice punches, flows and personals.i like you links too, facts, facts, facts. no ah hate vote but Soul Skripts' where r your audio's.return the fava
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Ya see , ya either . . 1.weak 2.laim or 3.dope , G
But ya must be 1 or 2 cos I`m already number 3 This was kind of basic- not great for an opener. i`m beating you down with ease . . & i'm imputing no such effort . . It's Sympathy ya called a vet . . or is it ya 36-4 record . . Not really feelin this... you really didn't insult him with this, more like a compliment. Getting garden tools for herbs – really sucks . but it's a job When im on aim -L.I's always like "What do ya think of my lines dawg" decent. Ya horrible with write's.. tripl n merked you , but ya know what's worse.. Making gay excuses like . ." it was a three minute no show verse" egh, I see where you were tryin to go I’ll show no mercy & rip this cat . . so he can drop his best line . . This kid’s 14 on puberty . . so yeah L.I means little Intestines Im not feelin this closer, I think your flow throughout was kinda choppy and the punches weren't very solid... ez. Thought you were a top head and considered somewhat a vet… Your own crew has awards and ur name aint even come up yet… lol- this was a funny opening punch, i enjoyed Got ya the wish bone and u drawed the small end, all luck’s gone… Reason you have so many names, couldn’t decide what to suck on… I see where you were tryin to go here but not really feelin the punch. good flow though Out of my league…our verses don’t even need to be compared… Quit the game cause like your avatar…your going no where… decent personal- Used to like this kid…he’s been exposed and there his grip went… I mean what kind of herb makes an audio callout wit out equipment… lol- funny punch with a good flow Just like ya custom text…your access to shine on this site’s been forbidden… Points startin to click that he sucks…cause he keeping his record hidden… I dont really feel the way you worded this, but the punchline was still o.k.... All in all i think you had a better flow and a better grasp of your punchlines, your structure stayed on through-out and I honestly feel it was the stronger of the two... Vote- L.I- Please return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...56&page=1&pp=15 |
Ya see , ya either . . 1.weak 2.laim or 3.dope , G
But ya must be 1 or 2 cos I`m already number 3 i`m beating you down with ease . . & i'm imputing no such effort . . It's Sympathy ya called a vet . . or is it ya 36-4 record . . Getting garden tools for herbs – really sucks . but it's a job This is 1...weak...2--wack....3---choppy I give you props on trying something different...but, it's a reason no one flows like that...it's choppy as shit...and it's filler Ya horrible with write's.. tripl n merked you , but ya know what's worse.. Making gay excuses like . ." it was a three minute no show verse" I’ll show no mercy & rip this cat . . so he can drop his best line . . This kid’s 14 on puberty . . so yeah L.I means little Intestines ^^ Now, you're on Triple's dick?...dawg, not a good punch or personal...ur dissin urself...and the little intestines line is HORRIBLE 20/40 Thought you were a top head and considered somewhat a vet… Your own crew has awards and ur name aint even come up yet… Got ya the wish bone and u drawed the small end, all luck’s gone… Reason you have so many names, couldn’t decide what to suck on… Out of my league…our verses don’t even need to be compared… ^^ That's how u use a personal...its not filler..might not be 100% fact...but it's believeable... Just like ya custom text…your access to shine on this site’s been forbidden… Points startin to click that he sucks…cause he keeping his record hidden… ^^ Decent closer... Rhyme TIE Flow LI Punches LI Vote: LI P.s. LI...I still think you're a DICK for what you did. But, you did win this battle. PERIOD. |
Aight 1 sided battle L.I got this no problem hit harder wit the punches & personals. Also he had an aight structure and also was more elevated on the rhyming.
Soul: But ya must be 1 or 2 cos I`m already number 3 /\ WTF?!? Thats a self diss dawg its aight though jus try and focus more for next time \/RTF on my sig vs Killah Bwoy |
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