Voted For: teckniquess

damn i think this battle is won.
tec had better structure, cuz lyrical madness rhyme was off like hell. tec had good punches, good meta at the end, and a overall better verse.If lyrical improved his structure, hed get more votes

u a free agent...u need to come to da 50th brigade..check my sig and look at our roster....ALSO im UPPIN THIS BATLLE FOR 2 MORE VOTES..........

uppin uppin uppin uppin...im tryin to get dis fuckin battle closed out....stop sleepin on da votes..ill return da favor just drop a link...

uppin uppin uppin this battle..drop a link if u want me to return and honest vote..holla back

somebody..just any 2 people....end this for me...and drop a link so i can return da favor..and if ur not in a battle when u get in one pm me da link just sum 1 vote...

This was feedback posted for *lyrical madnes*
 

personnally both of yah verses were weak lyrical madness man u had bad flow hard to follow teckniquess not bad but punches werent great all in all it was an aight battle i guess

Voted For: teckniquess

ha ha teckniquess killed this battle. lyrical madness had no chance at all. no punches no nothing. his whole verse was crowded. teckniquess killed him in about 3 barz.

Voted For: teckniquess

Vote goes to Teckniquess!!

Opener: you got da lyrical wordplay of twirked gays,wit hurt legs still runnin/thinkin u can cope wit a nigga from da brigade
well, preety good intro, slightly hard to understand but very good idea and pretty well executed!

yo step up to da stage i break u nose with 1 punch u didnt c it comin i am to fast i wil get my 1st win on u at last ill hit u hard down to tha floor soon it will be past//
beats u to da ground u got things on u head u got nocked out n thats without a dout i will kill u with a few slices ------- u dead drop to tha ground dont try n frown at last//
Very poor opener here, for a start the sentences are far to long and it has no real meaning to it!

Opener goes to teckniquess!!

Flow: teckniquess had very good flow, it was very consistant with sillables and rymes and was well strucured.

Lyrical Madness WTF ARE YOU ON!!! there was 86 words in your first to bars!!!!! you are ment to keep to 12-15 sillables per sentence, your rymes and flow was just wack and becuase of all the extra words, the points of your punches were lost, i have seen some of you other battles and you have good flow and good punches in them, get back to writing like that otherwise you will keep losing!

Flow to teckniquess

Punches to teckniquess, lyrical madness didnt have any stong punches!

no hate to lyrical madness, sorry man this was just a pathertic battle on your half, well done teckniquess, please return the favour by voting on one of the battles below!