Voted For: Inception

Ultimatum:

>Incepetion Your Not >Just Beginning< You've Just Ended Like The Presidential Election
Kids >Gay< Like >Empire< When They See Each Other They Catch An Erection
^^ehh 4/10
Your Confidence Has Just Bin Damaged As Soon As You Accepted This Challenge
You Wouldn't Elevate If You Boarded A Jet, There For I Got This Advantage
^^played concept 3/10
Your Congestion System Is Having Hard Time Digesting,Need Some Phillips??
My Punches Did That Damage,You Pitiful Bitch Your Harmless As Tulips....
^^ehh 4/10
On The Mic,I'll Blow Your Whole Style Up As If I Was Dynamite Despite
The Fact That Your Whack As Thug Life....I'll Banish You Off This Site
^^no 2/10
Intensifying Is'nt It The Effect Of My Punch You Straight Pussy Like Panties In A Bunch
^^no 2/10

Overall: 15/50 (30%)


Inception:

I'll Leave Thiz Wh0re Sore From Hordez Of Holez Lookin Similar To Porez
Im UnPredictable...He Could Do Inventory And Not No What I Have In Store
^^decent metaphor 5/10
U Beaten.. And I Aint Even Scorch-Yet, Leave Ya Corpze In Four-Shredz
But Im Leavin Thiz Baby In Hiz Crib Like Housez Wit No Porch-Stepz
^^decent bar good meta 6/10
You Hear Tha Soundz-Of-Ghostz, My Clipz Wrap Around-N-Choke
Beazy Muzt Be Wearen Turtleneckz, Tha Way My Shellz Surround-Hiz-Throat
^^sounds bitten 1/10
Dizlocate All Tha Bonez In Ur Body & Have You Really Feeling Out-Of-Place
Punchez Make Him See Starz Around Hiz Head Like A Night Out-In-Space
^^dope bar 8/10
Ult. Aint Tha Answer To Problemz So Forget Test Questionz While I Select Blessinz
Detect Confessionz Cus Tha Closest Thing He Came To Touchin A Nine Iz Molestin A Freshman
^^good meta good punch 7/10
Herez An Ultimatum Here Let Me State-Um Turn A Speculater Or Join Witnezz Protection
Have Ammo Accommodate Hiz Appearance An He'll Leave The Hospital Another Specimen!!!!!
^^no 3/10

Overall: 30/60 (50%)


Vote: Inception


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Voted For: Ultimatum

ok Inception u cant be talking about guns first of all, second ur verse was hella strecthced which mad eit have bad flow and some of ur vocab was way off and far from rhyming. Ultimatum wins for better punches and im thinknig a more thought out verse...check the sig

Voted For: Inception

weak battle...inception got it for better punches and shit.Ya know...

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Voted For: Inception

good drop u get tha vote inception......nice vocab flow everything was jus descent....no hate on the otha dude jus postin my honest opinion~~~peace~~~