ya kids.. keep it rollin in

this shit was fuckin hot!

Hey dont post bull-shit feed.........give proper feed, or none at all

uppin for some more feed

uppin fam........let it roll on in come on dont be shy

I didn't like this piece, I'm not into the gangs, guns, rape, etc... verses. It was ok, rather simple rhyming and nothing original. I raped this, I shot that, you get my point. Kinda put me to sleep.

everyone has there own opinion....but respect us as mc's as u would urself and if ur gunna take the time to point the negatives u damn sure as well better have time to show what we could do to get better, or what we did waht was good.......no hate no beef just stating my opinion........

uppin...................

damn this is pretty ill, I like how u guys divided it cuz it sounds like a big story, I like tha flow and the vocab. as well, this was a great piece..im definitely looking forward to 2 and 3, keep writing guys.... and if ya dont mind can ya vote on my topical battle or the other ones too?? but this piece was excelent 10/10..-PEACE

thanks for the feed ^^^ still uppin

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thanks for the feed ^^^ still uppin

thanks man... uppin for more

uppin for feedback dont be shy...

so now i got rape... seven to life in this peice

^^^^YO ITS PIECE...NOT PEICE......GRAMMAR LESSON ANYONE?

are you retarded ? lol
how did you JUST NOW notice that ? like shouldnt you have read it once or twice before seeing as its a colab WITH YOU lol uppin