uppin.............................................

Voted For: *holly$wood*

lol......
not the strongest battle here

Hollywood:
ya had some decent stuff, but some fillers also, work on structuring your flows better, an bein more consistant, like i said tho'...ya had decnt ideas, just word them better, but hands down you got this win

X:
Ya flow was blah, it was a lil too basic, an there was basically nothin that hasnt been said before or thast made me take note, step ya game up

Hollywood gets my vote

RTF Y'ALL

Peace out

Uppin.............................................

Voted For: X-CELL

yea. x cell is elevating. i think he took this one. better structure in this one, and better punches and mettas. this was alot better than tha other verse i read from you. i think you came harder in this one, and i think you had alil more confidence. just keep takin yo time in battle,s n keep comin up wit punches and shit, andu'll be dope.
hollywood-ur verse was too poorly structured for me to give u my vote. i wasnt feelin yo verse either. i think you came too soft. i think you should work on consistency, opener was kinda off, then it was on and off again thruout ur verse. work on that, but other than that, i seen no prob. wit yo verse, i just wasnt feelin it
my vote goes to xcell.

RTF, links in sig...thanx

Voted For: *holly$wood*

this one goes to hollywood

first of all- so many more lines
good flow nice punches
some metas


all around nice verse