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First off.. the beat is ill. Feelin it.
Verse 1: The flow was on point f'real. Feelin it all. Rhyming was dope too. Lyrics were tight. Hook: HOT. No doubt, this hook is dope. Verse 2: Flow is still on point throughout. Lyrics were good too. Felt the first verse over this one though. Overall: This song is a banger. No doubt.. I'm bout to bump it in my car lmao. Dope song |
ok typing as I listen...u changed the flow!!!...I'm liking the flow u choose an the energy..you don't have a hard voice...this is a beat that u wanna scare people with...an you jus not scary sounding...hook jus not feeling the blaka blaka part...u didn't deliver that part right sounds like u spit it thru with rest of hook..you shoulda punched it in an echoed it...it woulda came out way better....lyrics is generic...nothing special but this is jus a bumper an it serves its purpose...but you held the flow all the way thru an delivery was tight...had that laidback energy you really growing kid...an you used an original beat...I was feeling this overall kid...good shit....1
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I like it. Flow = 10 Sound = 9 (turn you down, turn up the beat just a little) Overall = 9.5/10 solid. down for a callab? |
thanks to all 3 for feedback. and word Czar, I got you as soon as I finish mixtape man. fashos. I'm down. thanks to all tho. upp
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beat is derrty... definitely riding the beat... like da adlibs... hold on... was that a jay 286 reference?... hmmmm... "life's like ya song ...full of wack lines".... just asking.... coulda been a coincidence... but yeah... vocals need to be lowered a tad... quality is cool, though... not sure if you're talking about someone specific or just spitting for da sake of it... blakka blakka....likes how dats thrown in there...lol good shyt man.... get a lil more lyrical on ya joints... or maybe touch a topic that's off da wall or sumn to make ya shyt stand out more.... do da dew! |
^lol thanks, man. and nah, wasn't dissing anyone. I said
"I'll leave your life like your song, kid.. full of flat lines" not to JAy lol |
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beats ok. very commercial, like your production on the intro, you have decent quality. Flows on point,dubs work well, lyrics are cool. presence is good. Hooks nice and commercial your usual style.lol. decent track bro. |
^appreciate feed man. thanks. uppp
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9,000......... upp
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Listenin'...yup this beat is crack familia, feelin' the intro...beat is bangin', vocals a bit low IMO...a bit too much bass...but other than that ya shit is tight...lyrics funny and pretty nice punches...turtle line and baby line started real nice..delivery is unique fam and im definitely feelin' it fam...hook is catchy fam..im definitely feelin that...
Flow = tight all the way thru, didn't ever fall off..switch ups were nice..\ Lyrics = you got decent lyrics, nothin that'd make me go woah, rewind that shit...but regular lyrics... Delivery = unqiue delivery fam, prolly 1 of the best here on rv, so all praise to that... Hook = real catchy fam, so thats good... Entertainment = kept me entertained all the way thru..def a downloadable but yo ass didnt put it up for 1 so boo..llol.. 9/10.. Hot, 1 |
^word appreciate it man
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