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Magic5 08-23-05 06:12 PM

First verse - SPuL ripped it like pancakes nah mean? Quality was cool.. flow was pretty nice.. your emotion in the tracks has gotten better.. decent delivery..

Second verse - lmfao @ how the quality is trash.. vocals are a little too loud.. ehh.. flow is decent.. your emotion has improved..

Third verse - quality is decent enough.. flow is pretty good.. you need to work on your emotion and stuff.. its all good though..

Hook - pretty catchy.. nah mean?

Overall, decent track.. I got to say SPuL had the best verse and shit.

But, its all good like pancakes nah mean? (FUCK SAUSAGES)

J. Luth 08-23-05 06:31 PM

^lmao.... thanks for feed, like sausages nah mean? (FUCK PANCAKES!!!) :shoot:

J. Luth 08-24-05 02:23 AM

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J. Luth 08-24-05 11:04 AM

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ParowdOx 08-24-05 01:19 PM

ight listening...classic beat..
quality is crisp..
the 1st guy flow is dope, sounds west coast..
good emotion, at times lacks but its still there..
chorus is cool..crew thing..i feel ya lol..
2nd guy, hmm,, his quality is not that good,
his flow is cool but the emotion is lacking, sounds like hes bored..
last guy sounds like a computer...good punches tho..
and his flow is ok..

overall solid track...1st guy shined

peep my shit..
peace
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J. Luth 08-24-05 03:28 PM

^thanks man. appreciate your feed. drop a link anytime, and i'll peep your shit. upp,....

J. Luth 08-24-05 04:27 PM

bop.......................

J. Luth 08-24-05 07:58 PM

1,2,3, you uou yuy

Sik Wit It 08-25-05 12:37 AM

lol..........the chorus is nice & the verses are nice too
haha everyone gettin on Tizz bout his quality.. maybe
its his first time? shit.. but anyway u had a good verse
too.. at first u sounded weird n' shit, but w/e & decree
liked that Kanye West line.. shit was aight.. but overall
all of u had nice verses...................keep it up bitches

Lay-z 08-25-05 02:14 AM

Intro: SPuL- good...
First verse: SPuL- pretty good lyrics, i liked
Second verse: Tizzle- too loud, but was good, just work on flow
Third verse: Decree, i like how he sounds..and the kanye line was funny..
Hook: SPuL- was ight, liked it though
Outro: SPuL- good...

J. Luth 08-25-05 12:16 PM

thanks aiight uppin...........

Traidmarxâ„¢ 08-25-05 02:29 PM

this shit isn't bad.... let me break it down


1st verse - flow was polished but maybe just a lil too animated for the beat... but ya lyrics were nice......

2nd verse - nice verse nice delivery nice lyrics just a problem with the quality but i'm not gonna criticize that cause i mean that could all be changed with the right amount of editing and what not...

3rd verse - i loved this verse so many metaphors and wordplay it was nuts i liked it loved the brenda's baby line keep it up man


overall nice collab shit was good and keep doin ya thing people later holla at me if ya ever wanna put me on a track later...

J. Luth 08-25-05 03:35 PM

^yea, thanks for feed, man. And yea we'll holla, jus gotta finish a few more group tracks, and i'll holla. word. thanks tho. upp

J. Luth 08-25-05 06:27 PM

whoa?...........

DaCument 08-25-05 07:53 PM

yo...i'm feeling this fam, yall boyz came off on it, good drop duke and stay up

easy


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