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Voted For: final

Untraceable: Nice multis, kept the flow going. Structure was good as well. Imagery was ok, but not as good as final. The story line was good as well. Another ironic ending. Your rhyming felt forced sometimes though.

Final: Imagery was pretty good, I could see this story in real life, probably because it has happened. Vocab wasn't as good as your previous battles, but overall ok. Story line was pretty good, I like the ironic ending, always fun to laugh at people when they get what they deserve. Work on more multis. FLow was good as well.

Overall I felt final took this, his story line and imagery was better, and his rhyming wasn't as forced as Untraceable's felt to me.

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v/final

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uppin....yeah....i kinda rushed my verse.....so thats why some seemed forced prolly........but ohh well............uppin

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Voted For: Untraceable

wow, both were deep...

Untraceable:

your views painted a thorough picture inside my thoughts as i read your verse, i read both slowly and steadily and i concluded yours was indepth more conservative and non fiction related, the tale was essentially argumentative and it was somewhat realistic, infact fully possible and actually self relating. but i also presume you didnt have a story in mind as you started, you just began writing and came up with something as you continued from your blatant origin, but im not suggesting you change your style, i think it was predominately successive here, you had good structured lines, a few crossed as lengthy, but most were positive. the multis were abundant, and you promoted your vocabulary extensively within your mutis, the connection of the two made my decision, final's verse was undoubtedly good as well, in all greivencess, i claim their was no better skill that took action on either opponent's side, but i also take notice of the scheme, and yours was overseeing final's. i enjoyed this battle, hence my time in voting. congrats to Untraceable, you receive my vote, and nice job Final.

vote: Untraceable

dont return the favor, that is not why i vote.

This was feedback posted for Untraceable
 

uppin.....thanks for the honest explained vote........thats what i like to see........uppin

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