Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

kind of weak battle from Soul Sickness,your shit was played and basic.
Lady Fiya, that was good for a 5 minute drop. I liked your lin about his record and the other 2 nbars after that.Your verse after that got weaker but it was still dope.
Soul you need to work on your structure and try to use more personals in your verse.Dont be scared to make up witty wordplay and your punches need some work also.
Props to both.
V/Lady Fiya

This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 

good shit this is just to see the feed back

This was feedback posted for Soul Sickness
 

I gotta give it to you because you canme out the blocks spittin hard.Nice punches and flow. lady fiya nice verse. u had factual punches but soul sickness just had a better sounding verse

uppin for a voter to finsh this off finally foreal people stop sleepin.............

yea, this been open for two months now, ain't that sum natural bullshit..

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

well to be quite honest lady fiya won this verse with her opener and i would be ashamed of that. not saying that because she's a girl and beat you that its bad but if anyone beats you with their first bar alone then you know you need to elevate so there's no reason for me to tell you to do so. lady you had a decent flow but no real hard punches a couple average punches and good wordplay but soul came so wack in this battle that you won easily.. ive seen you do better than this soul im dissapointed in that verse..

decent battle

v/LF