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M-Eazy 04-29-05 10:14 AM

Oh, nvm...good, its not. Well' I'm uppin ya'll battle. ~1~

Restricted 04-29-05 10:37 AM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Aight..

.::Daz::.

Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
Blah..This Wasn't That Good 4/10
You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
Hmm...6/10
hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
Decent Metaphors 8/10
who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)
Worst..3/10

Daz's Verse: 21/40

.::King Solo::.

Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
First Line Was Sick, Last Line Sucked..4/10
Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
Nothing Special 4/10
Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
Blah...Boring 4/10
Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
.......4/10

Kings Verse: 16/40

Overall: Daz's Consistency and Harder Punches Shown Through Here. King I Think Your Battling Too Much and Wearing Yourself Out or Sumthing.

Vote: Daz

~R~
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Adam 04-29-05 10:50 AM

This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤
 
Polls...

Nice drop fam, this is a good battle..

Adam 04-29-05 10:52 AM

Wow...MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ votes for Solo...interesting because Solo is on Jurys dick like mad...

King Solo 04-29-05 12:34 PM

^^^ ure a fuckin little bitch............everytime i battle one of ya precious crew members ya always in my battles talkin like i'm on everyones dick when they vote for me..........stay the fuck out of my shit!!!!!!

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-29-05 12:40 PM

chill bro, dont instigate it more......dont need our battle
to turn into a solo n red bull beef thread

GKillaz05 04-29-05 02:21 PM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

¤ÐÅž¤ - Good spit, you had a good flow, hot rhymes.. are your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)

Worst Line - hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders

Solo - iight spit, this is weak comin from you, had some iight punches and it flowed well.

Best Line - Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…

Worst Line - Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…

OVERALL - close battle, but I think Daz took this one. He flowed just as well and he had better wordplay and rhymes. Punches were hitten hard also. No hate solo, just call em how I see em.

Vote - Daz

morse code 04-29-05 09:57 PM

Voted For: Solo

this was a very close battle...daz this isnt any hate or anything towards your vote in my battle...

daz-good:nice werdplay, structure and closer...my fav line was the closing one...nice job in doing this verse....6/10
bad:your punches were close and hit just as hard as solos did, however you had few personals, and multies...the opener i wasnt feelin either

solo-good:had some multies but not many, like the punches they hit just as hard as daz's...nice opener and closer....also nice personals throughout...6.5/10
bad:vocab could be increased...it also seemed like your verse stayed on one topic, try to hit different areas, instead of having all your personals based on one thing

overall:
opener-s
closer-d
vocab-d
multies-s
punches/werdplay-tie
personals-s
flow-s
structure-d

v/solo

Sik Wit It 04-29-05 10:25 PM

Voted For: Solo

Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
…good bar here & good opener
Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
decent punch…
Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
nice shit here
Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
whoa…good closer here


Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
…nah weak opener
You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
decent punch here
hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
nah…not feelin this punch here
who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)
wack punch…

overall…this was a one-sided vote here…
the FLOW ..u both had ther
the PUNCHES ..that goes to SoLo.. came way harder than DAz’s
the MULTIES ..goes to DAz

but anyway.. SoLo took this one here…just came harder in the punches
than worryin about multies or w/e…no hate though…just speakin the truth

...return the favor SoLo

King Solo 04-30-05 03:10 AM

...........................*humpin ya mama*............................

DQ 04-30-05 10:32 AM

Voted For: Solo

Solo

Daz Ya Skill Is Like “Fresh New Sheets” The Way It Never “In-Creases”…
Kill Ya By Rippin Ya Head Off..And I’ll Leave The Rest Of Ya In Pieces…
^rofl @ first line, second's okay

Reppin The Council Like King Arthur..Daz The Round Table Text Leader…
How Does TC Get Respect When They Bein Repped By Clothing Cleaner…
^haha, dope dope

Daz Loves Me Wishin To Be My Boxers..So He Could Be Touchin My Dick…
Look No Further Than His Sig..I Ripped Him And He’s Still Uppin My Shit…
^nice bar

Dude Goes Around Treatin Animals..Thinks It’ll Make Him A Better Vet…
Yo, I’ll Tell Ya What Defines A Real Vet………Sumthin You’ll Never Get…
^bold closer

Nice verse, good punches in there with some funny wordplay combined with dope and hardhitting personals. Had your flow on lock, structure was cool and found an excellent balance with your vocab.



¤ÐÅž¤

Ya punches missed, wheres ya scary scripts ? cuz solo’s flow is barely sick
call ya god’s chick, cuz ill hit this almighty bitch like beatin a Jim Carrey flick,
^funny opener, nice multi too

You break quick,! As if you’re the virus in the matrix….you phase this ?
solo’s basic, plus he nose hes losing something like anticipating a face lift
^hmmmm, i'm not feeling this but could be me...personal opinion i guess

hes a nono vender, cuz he couldn’t key hot if solo .... touched embers
& ya an over-rated member n its easy to damage ya car-rear like fender benders
^nice wordplay right here

who’s solo crossed ? ill leave his fake set ex-posed like obese chicks polo bras
ya text proves flaws, n reverse ya name in shock, like ya say ‘o’los (oh-loss)
^bold personal as closer

Nice verse as well, hot and bold personals, good punches with nice wordplay even though I didn't really like the second bar. You had better flow due to the multis, vocab was good as well as structure.

This is a fucking close battle but I'ma go with Solo because I feel his punches a bit more than Daz's but both had a dope verse without a doubt! Hot battle from the both of you, no hate whatsoever!

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-30-05 11:57 AM

you three are not the people that should be
voting on this battle...you's
either dont battle, or have no skill at all........
.
srry solo, but stop tellin them wack text cats to vote..

Germ 04-30-05 12:22 PM

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

haha, this battle was cooo

solo, not bad man, thought your opening line was cool, but then the next line was just self-glor/played, didnt work good....i knew you would use the daz cleaner line, it was okay, kinda funny....but i think you fell off in your last two bars, closer was weak as hell, and i dont think daz wants to touch your dick, ya hear? haha, but not bad, you came out a little too basic, nothing really creative, nothing that speical, like i said, if you kept the consistency of your first two bars, you may have takin this, but nah, daz got it

daz man, hot wordplay man, mixed in with some creative punches, i was laughing at some, i think you won this based on complexity, creativity, and harder punches, you attempted more difficult text, and you made it work, it wasn't basic, it flowed nicely, good structure, multies in there, overall, it was a consistently solid verse, keep up yo

v/daz, for harder punches

King Solo 04-30-05 12:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ¤ÐÅž¤
you three are not the people that should be
voting on this battle...you's
either dont battle, or have no skill at all........
.
srry solo, but stop tellin them wack text cats to vote..



and the irony behind this little statement is that he wouldn't be sayin shit if they had voted for him..................... :nono: whinin about shit aint gonna get ya anywhere in life

and Kesse is only votin against me cuz i voted against him in like 2 of his battles...........he was even whinin about that shit in the longest thread in LL but i aint bothered..........i'll let that shit stand!!!!

^^..^^ 05-01-05 07:04 AM

this is disgusting solo me and you go wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy back sun but your being d.red here daz killed you and thats just being real dont know how you winning :huh:


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