Spoken Prophecy: I enjoyed reading your drop actually, it had a lot of common knowledge in it and you really managed to transfer a message to your readers. The emotion was a strong aspect of your piece and not so much imagery. Vocab was excellent, flow was good but your structure kinda made it hard to read though, rhymes didn't always work out either but the content of your piece was very powerful.
The Revelation: excellent piece right here, very creative as well and just the entire build up was amazing. You managed to write down a fascinating blend of imagery and emotion throughout nice vocab and with a good flow. Structure made it easy to read, especially also the division into several stages. Strongest aspect was creativity expressed by an amazing mix of raw emotion and perfect imagery. One of the best I've seen from you :thumbup:
No hate Spoken Prophecy but he was just too good for you this time...
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