do u muthafuckaz vote on here?........................................

This was feedback posted for _JooKsta_
 

your jawnt was pretty nice....but, he had a better finisher...

Voted For: CeleriTy

Celerity-- Text so small...lol..nah but your verse flowed good, creative in parts, punches were ok....

Jooksta-- Multis were ok, though i hate the way u write ur shit hurts my eyes man, flow was ok, and punches were alright...

Punches-- Tie
Flow- Celerity
Multis- Jooksta
Structure-- Tie
Creativity-- Celerity
Wordplay-- Jooksta
Metaphors-- Celerity

Final Vote----- Celerity......

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Voted For: _JooKsta_

Aii Man This Is what I Think

Aii ..


Joksta
Niec drop Man You came Very nice with exceptions of your first bar Bcuz that one wasnt all dat but all the rest were on Q
Far as I can Tell all You need to Do Is Str8en Out Ya Structure a Lil Bit More And Then Leave All Those Lil ~!@## Marks outta Ya Verse Then You will Be str8 Man

Celerity
Aii Man Jus becuase your verse Was in red doesnt mean it will be on fir LOL J/k Man You dropped very nice and I thin kYou Wouldve had this battle if you wouldntve Let Go of that Strong verse you Was Dropping fdrom Teh begining Man ......Sp Im Sorry Ima Have to give it to the other guy SOryy
No Hate man You Nice

RTF In the battle link i8n my Sig pleas

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upin dis fuckin battle for votes.................................

upping nicca............................................. ...

Voted For: CeleriTy

alrite man let me break this down...

Celerity- your font was really hard to read.. and most of ur punches were multi-use.. but your flow stayed on the whole way thru.. and the structure was alright.

Jooksta- you really need to work on writing harder hitting punches. you had some but they were really basic and they werent anything that really caught the eye. your structure was the most annoying thing i have ever read.. but beside that decent for a beginner.

Vote. Celerity for harder hitting punches and an easier to read structure.. no hate.. elevate