well, i was worried seeing as how long the bars were it wouldn't flow, but it kept to itself nicely, good usage of voocab, you set it up clearly, opened it well, put your imagry to work, so.........props

I liked this, it was pretty ill man...these were my favorite lines:

"He Cradles Air So Thin, Nothing To Caress His Tormented Soul
As Voices Own His Soul, His Facial Expression Is Cemented Dull"

"He Cant Let Go, Troublesome Tragedies Overwhelm Thoughts Process
Trying To Salvage Sanity, But Only To Capture All Of “Its” Excess"

...this was some pretty crazy content, but in an ill way...

Nice drop

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Might Aswell Up My Old Piece

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