I was feeling this hommie. It was a long read, but that never bothers me. The flow was nice, good word play, and vocab... Maybe work on your structure, but I dont think it really effected the flow... Nice topic, you have elevated alot from seeing your precious drops... Nice work hommie...

( please return the favor and check " Remember Our Love " Its in open mic, please tell me what you think of it hommie... )