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wtf is up with you people...just drop a fuckin vote and a link...
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Spitsoul - I wasnt really feeling the verse. The punches wernt bringing full effect. You had nice structure, and an alright flow. The verse just didnt appeal to me. It was straight, but could have been put in better words. Ya know, hommie...
DarkForce - You had this battle one all around. Your punches hit harder and had more effect. I liked the structure, just like spitsoul. Saw some alright word-play in there. Over all, you won this battle... Vote - DarkForce |
Ohh, and be sure to return the favor by making an honest vote on the battle in my sig hommie. It would be much appriciated...
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split had some decent rhymes, pretty good flow, shit actually rhymed unlike a lot of stuff im seein on dis site.
but darks punches were overall better, like the religious professional line, overall more clever. vote: darkforce |
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uppin fo votes....drop a link and I'll return the favor(100+ posts only)............................................. ...................................
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all I want is some fuckin votes...is that too much to ask from a website who has 30,000+ members for fucks sake?
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word but breakdown structure- df flow- df punches- df wordplay- df enjoyment- df creativity- df complexity- df effor- tie humor- none overall- df SPLIT VERSE: yo, even ya bars out, get betta structure, PUNCHES PUNCHES PUNCHES!! use wordplay and get betta flow Dark Verse: u had ok structure, ok punches, and aight flow. you did enuff to do the job. work on your wordplay.. everyone hit this up please honest votes only http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99268 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101995 |
finish this off for me...just need a couple more votes...I will return the favor............................................. ...............
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finish this off for me...just need a couple more votes...I will return the favor............................................. ...............
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Dark Force fucked this up...
Better everything, really... Structure, better. Punches, alot better Wordplay, again, better Flow, better Closer, eh...but still managed to be better. Best line also...that "condom/confessional" line made me laugh. Tight verse, man. Split, add more to ya shit... No one likes stretched lines... But, come on. Make em at least have substance. Peace Holla back on this... Need your vote! |
need one vote to KO this herb...drop a link and I'll return the favor............................................. ........................................
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damn, darkforce got it...flow, vocba, hits, etc.
splitsoul-need to work on flow a little more vote=DF |
dark force got this
His verse was better, but both of you need to cut the line lenght some... Split, your punches were kinda weak and you should try to make lines about the same lenght vote dark |
Dark Force DQed for uppin more than 5 times.
Read rules.. any posts after both verses are dropped will be considered an up. |
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