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check it .....heres the breakdown...
personals...Crooked that shit about reigh on your dick liked it... punches...yea crooked had some ok shit too simplistic though dog up that shit... flow....definatly crooked i couldn't barely read with all those bracts and dashes and shit.....fix that... opener...really wasn't feelin that first line by eki no hate just thought it was a forced personal... closer...hehe i did like Eki's closer though that was some good shit...you both got skill try get more creative ...one |
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hmm.....ugly battle........but good for the beef sake........
struct - cc punches - cc flow - cc herbish - eki vocab complex - eki opener - tie closer - cc overall - cc...........better all around............both elevate...... gj. |
one more vote people... i got killed .. congracts cc......................................lets close this shit!............................................. .................................................. .....................
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AMEN!!!
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vote : crooked-comical.......good shyt yo**************
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ALRIGHT MODS PLEASE CLOSE THIS AND GIVE ME MY WIN THATS 5- 0 THANX
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mah votez on cc.....u got dis unda ur foot.....it waz a good battle but crooked-comical hit dis harder..........good lookz 2 both....
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structure- crook( srry eki but u had no structure)
punches - crook flow - crook opener - same closer - crook vote: crooked comical ********************** ********************* |
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what doesnt kill ya makes you stronger.... thanks for the vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
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nice props ta both
opener-crook closer-crook punches-crook flow-crook structure-eki vote-crooked |
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