not very impressed with either one of you, but someone does have to win. I am giving my vote to carson....strictly on structure. Both of you need to elevate....keep at it!

Even though I have an active battle with Profit... this is no where near a hate vote...

Carson... I liked the flow good multis and personals...

Profit you came strong but your structure and flow where lacking. And you used no personals from what I could tell... that and the style make it seem a little pre-written. Even though I don't think that it was. Good shit though... Kepp doing your thing.

My vote goes to Carson this time.

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Opener: C
Punches: C
Personals: C
Vocab: Mc
Flow: C
Structure: C
Closer: C

C took this shit easily....Close in a few cata's but nj to u both