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hmm.. let me put it this way -Jacka- you can bitch all you want. but i wen over only a little bit and my fault for that.. but why. you just suck.. not hate or anything but its pretty lame.. you look for the smallest thing to bitch about and get a win.. so basicly you would do anything for a damn win. theres lots of other people that do have broke their own rules, but you dont see anyone bitching about it. its only a line limit dawg i dont see why you have to make a problem out of it, just take a losse kid.
every one brakes the rules once i bet even you broke your own rules. but if you want you can get this closed. but remember you didnt beat me, i had you by your neck. while you where kissing my feet.. so dawg if you want me DQ'ed then thats considered the most lamest excuse of wanting a win.. even if i matched your the line limit you still would of been Defeated.. i just wanted to add a little something something.. Peace. No hate im just proving a point. this aint cool yo. |
WTF.. i just read you IR post.. why do you have to go and lie for dawg.. never said 8 lines cause you cant post any less than 10..plus you went over 8 yourself so i dont see why bitch idiot. i simply said 8-9 BARS.. that is 18 lines dumb shit..
You never said anything about going over the lines was a DQ.. so cry me a river.. Peace... |
fo sho. i think verstyle should win because the other dude seems to have about a zero honor factor.
anyways, lets break it down. verstyle just took it all. other dude stuck with one theme, bein a faggot, while verstyle seemed to mix it up a bit... structure was better in verstyles too. the closers were pretty even, but if you take verstyles whole second verse as a closer, he gets it fo sho... vote: verstyle check out the acrobatics or vote on my shit... Nookie vs FreakyJay Nookie vs JustinKredible Nookie vs madman-doubleSS paice... |
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Flow=Verstyle Multis=Verstyle Wordplay=Jacka Vocab=Verstyle vote= Verstyle Vote gone.. Read new voting rule on front page -Token |
Polls set at 2-0.. No more freeposting.. both of you get 5 more ups..
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I'll rip open your mind just like my name was Hannible my recital can handle this vandal's lyrical ammo, A fanatical cannibal spittin nice mulites but thats all u got textual mandibles against a cold blooded mammal that's barely an animal I'll beat on your chest, without CPR certification forget the respiration there won't be any need for recessitation I'll drag you down to my basement, strip your ass fuckin naked dip my gloves in nice mulites aite wordplay glass shavings and beat you into amazement ,Cause Jacka is a gay kid, like scenes from Pulp Fiction as he eats shit and gulps piss until his lips glisten I can paint you a mental image to ravage your gimmicks, I easily piss on your lyrics, you strain to attain my lyrical limits, it's Disasterous Rhymes that you mimic, this post is ragingly livid, because you insult a beautiful style every time that you spit it 33.5/50 Screw it here is the finisher: this loss is set in stone like Medusa persuade your vision crude flows of crimson just entered your lights prism malice intentions creating dictions Webster's dictionary was missin you head grinds on the floor missionary to sensor friction realities given a new transition for you to live in body bullet ridden, corpse slain with fire from propane cancerous nose pains leaves stains for chemotherapy to change now your no game attemps have left you with no gain you're like a retard with aids, you'll die slow and in pain over the line limit a TAd bit huh I’m striking quickly when I’m keying, always shaking static// Yo, this kid aint getting heated, he’s just a flaming faggot// Nice wrdplay..an punch average I can make it happen, you lose and I will take the win// Your boyfriend caves your ass in , cuz you like to play with men// LOL Don’t deny your gay in trends; you smoke sausage like a chef// Your cock mouth mightily offends; we all caught it on your breath// aite You’ll be dodging from my threats; I’m intent on stomping you// I got you balling from the stress, wondering wut u got ya self into// decent shit My defense stops his moves; he can’t score against me// Watch out, cuz of whom you were speaking, will leave you beaten in two// But really you got me thinking, “Why you so eager to lose ?” // Nice punch ..Very CONSISTENT ya lines hit like beebes..my hollow tips left rips in ya text-ure Verstyle= Bitch..well thats the definition given in "Websters" ^^that closer did it for me 37/50..very consistent..good shit orignal also.. Vote Jacka |
Ver come manz you said type something quick for our battle, your taking like missions to type up something..
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Its all ready been broken down so theres no need for me to do it, My vote goes to jacka reason being^^his ideas where original and not played like vers, much harder hitting to vers verse, but still not a enoyable battle..
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can we get some more votes in this battle the poll has been reset.. for some reason............................................ .................................................. ...............
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Personals=Jacka u had sum dope lines dat i was feelin Flow=Verstyle Multis=Verstyle Wordplay=Jacka jacka u had good use of words verystyle u need 2 improve on this Vocab=Verstyle Opener=Verystyle jacka urs was wack and made no sense 2 me Closer:Verstyle Multi's:verstyle took this 1 as jacka contained none...jacka if it contained sum it would of bin good and interesting as ur verse was good. Structure:Jacka good nice structure lines were same length but verstyle urs was fucked up on this battle need 2 improve here my vote= Verstlye overally this was a dope battle but i tink verstyle took this 1 jacka unucky man keep elevatin |
jacka killed this, much much better structured flow some nice multis.. good flips, the flamin faggot line, rest of verse was consistant, vers was all over the place with his flow, its not baout flow its about what u put in the flow, punches n shit u need to make ur lines hit harder, u were outclassed in this battle jacka is obviously not a newbie and just spit wittier shit so, vote-jacka
return the favor hit up this battle, and poll vote when u get 100 dont forget we gettin slept on creativity-730 punches-tie personals-eh.. not many originality-carson disses-carson 730 i didnt know when i came either, apparently the carson/mtv thing is played, i used a different flip also.. but carson came more straight forward with his disses, 730's about rocket ships nice line.. but other than that alot seemed rushed and unthought out.. carson came a little bit more consistant and original so.. vote-carson.. return the favor hit this up we need real votes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102040 |
whoops, i was gonna vote on another battle, but when i went to paste my shit it was closed, and i guess i kept it copied with my link, so disregaurd the carson/730 vote lmao sorry..
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um its not letting me poll vote, dunno whats wrong..
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it shud be 2-2..... wtf.... uppin for sum poll voters...read the wordplay. only GOod emcees understand it. u dik riders are ^^^^^^^ |
Verstyle wins this in the most unusual way...
He had a structure that sucked visually but somehow seemed to stay together... He had a good drop.. Not too many personals.. but lot's of meta's and wordplay... Jacka was hot but he needed to be a lil more witty for the type of short style he used. If you gonna limit the words they gotta have some impact. Hot battle but Verstyle gets this with a tenacious 200 bars or some shit... |
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