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plz vote

well first off both of yalls verses were pretty weak. But heres my vote:

DOC-had some alright punches, and some waCc punches. Flow was pretty good. But some things bout ur spit was basic. For example ur vocab was basic. U should use some more multis in there. But overall u did pretty good, just need some elevation and ull be able to do better.

168-no offense but that verse was pretty waCc. Some lines didnt even rhyme. the prescription/information line didnt rhyme and the KKK/stiCc line didnt rhyme. i dun kno y u thought they did, Cuz they was way off. Overall ur verse was weak and u need ta learn how to thyme better, no hatin just statin facts.

VOTE:doc

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my vote goes 2 doc_knock!!

reasons:

doc_knock had good punches, structure, flow a good opener helped and a shit closer!

168 had good punches but u need 2 improve on ur structure and flow and ur personals u need 2 look them up!!

uppin once more...yo, need more votes, this needs to close, so close to being done, just help us finish it off, thanks

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ayo,

big blak woods got ta put his two cents in...

ayo, this was an aight battle... kinda old though...

i give it to doc.. just because his flow was easier to get into. he had harder punches too.

168 you was kool too.. just work on your structure.. try to make words and lines connect better...