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its not stupidity... its bordem ... i did this for fun... ha... i always do... i'mma open mic cat... u wanna get on some serious ish... get on me wit some topical's.... then we can see who's the ILLEST... uppin this... so this can be closed... hell... u can have it dunny.. u win...BLAH... i cam major wack... not even tryin ... Caesar On3 |
MD Killa
watch me break you off somthin proper the lyrical doctor given you a dead female dressed in the prom queens apron// 4/10 i'll murder you bitch like the white chicks in the kill bill/ fuckin you over wit white tip dicks~u'll still say a black man did it// 4/10 the raz~fuck this fake fag i'll put a bullet in his esphogus/ watch'em clap~with a busted rhyme that he swear that was fired up// 5/10/10 lyrically break nigga's neck when i spray with these text~fuck ya midsection/ squeeze ya whole body to lose ya air compression~ like strained errections// 7/10 i'mma me rape this faggot ~ an i won't even ejectulate/ he gotta dickriding ring because all people are shapes// 7/10 some of you shit never evan ryhmed?? overall 27/50 Raz Dogg this ain't the poetry section, nigga rhyme a word "i'm just a sick newbie" nah son you the definition of herb 7/10 Your off balance, outta sync and you admit your structure is fuck 1-1 born in December and you the nigga wishin me goodluck?! 6/10 I searched your history, same type of verses, Your raps are cliche unfinished battles, you can't get a vote, chances are history will repeat today 6/10 Hanging off Nuclear Concepts dicks, shit i knew you had to be nuts for battling me, and he's a virgin, peep his sig, he never been touched 7/10 From the land of the warriors, oh i get it, you must be the waterboy I know you wrote a better verse, common please tell me the first was a decoy 7/10 your first punches i was harsh o because you fed of his verse. overall 34/50 my vote Ragz plz drop an honest vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101874 |
This seriously needs vote.... all of them have been d/q'd becuz thay weren't done correctly........
so its 1-0 plz get this over with........ |
hey...i voted on ur battle so would u plz drop an honest vote on mine plz............count dis as a free uppin for ya.
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Need this over with Plz end this shit...........
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Hm, i voted on this one already. But i didn't do it correctly apparently. So i'll explain the breakdown..
Flow- Raz, this stems from his structure which was ten times better, made the flow more consistent structure- Raz, his lines were even, no question he won this personals- Raz, the poem line was so true.... punches- Raz, hit harder becuase he knows how to actaully punch. That's the breakdown, vote goes to Raz. |
Have a mod put my vote in because it won't let me vote right now, thanks............................
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2-0 need final votes,.........................
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Ok, Raz murdered this child........heres the breakdown.....
Flow-Raz(cause his structure was on point) Structure-Raz (flowed well and was prettier) Personals-Raz (Poetry line) Punches-Raz(who else?) Metaphors-Both lacked but Raz Multies-neither Vocab-tie Enjoyability-Raz( easier to decipher) Drum roll please......the winner was absolute mismatch merking Raz.No hate, good verse Raz...keep elevating MD...... |
opening - raz............................
flow - raz......................... punches - raz......................................... metas - md............................ multis - blah......................... closing - raz................................ overall - raz............................... and fuck...md if ya gonna battle make ya shit rhyme |
My Vote Goes To Raz..I Feel He Came Out With Better Punchlines And Some OK Personals Throughout His Verse..MD_Killa Aint Have Much Flow In His Verse..Didn't Even Rhyme Alot Of Words..But My Vote Goes To Raz For Better Punchlines And Aight PErsonals.
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dont you hate it when ya alias's dont got 100 posts? :( |
Md killer, you had no structure no flow.. and i didnt feel any punches. Raz demolished you in every aspect. no hate just my vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101794 |
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