Corporal I can only up votes 5x so u gotta start uppin for votes,

Uppin x2 people don't sleep on this battle, like otha ones

uppin for votes, come on people vote on this battle if u view it, don't sleep on it Like otha battles UPPIN x3

..up..i hate uppin anythin...

its gay but..we need votes i geuss..

it cant end 1-0

oh an carson..incse you didnt realise..i jus thought maybe you didnt understand that wordplay...

it was a play off my own name...Corps is short for Corporal..

if they was saying Corps on the floor..they aint talkin bout me..they talkin bout his body..

now look..i fell into the trap of explainin wordplay..that sucks :(

can we have atleast 1 vote before night ends..

thank you very much..

if you vote i will drop feedback on any piece of yours..i can not poll vote but i will listen to audio's..break down battles or whatever..thanks

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lemme ce....

7: this dude spit hard 2 me....his punches were on point, shit kinda didnt flow well cuzz sum bars seemd longer, but it fuccn smashd...
--"Dawg, you think your name's hot, I'll shoot 5x in the same spot/
And embarras u worser, then when i heard u shoot blank shots/"




corp: ure shit was coo, but it laccd punches, u needed 2 hit harder..i liked ure line...
--"Im Iller than the Champ himself..this herb aint gonna Grow when im planting shells
you aint got a chance in hell so ima kill you wit Too-Mour like Cancer Cells"


but 2 me cuzz came harder...

VOTE=7


CIN

:shoot:

uppin' votes x4 come on people vote please******************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *******

upping x5 for the last time please people vote on this battle, don't sleep on it, juss poll and explain

se7en took this. he had better wordplay and his multis were in time. corporal, that could have been a pre-written diss, we dont know, but it just seemed very open. no real attack at se7en.

best line se7en: Dawg, you think your name's hot, I'll shoot 5x in the same spot/
And embarras u worser, then when i heard u shoot blank shots/

worst line se7en: I give a fuck about u bitch, shit u might as well make a wish/
Everytime I see you post, I can see, taste, and smell fish/

best line corporal: Low Posts but I Slow Roast this Next dude..gonna be a Vet Soon

worst line corporal: You Suck Aint No Lucky Seven its Useless Throw in the towel Powell
Cos You Spit so Much Whack Shit you must have Emptied ya Bowel

keep elevatin but the two of ya's...

Low Posts but I Slow Roast this Next dude..gonna be a Vet Soon

LMAO..my set up was my best line..didnt aim no personals cos..its nothin to do wit sever..i posted first an keyed..it was posed ot be in within 30..i took like 35..he took an hour...

i could easily spend time on some bars an murder this dude if it he wants a rematch...a little more violent talk cos the wordplay aint making it at this site

soz for free postin, but i forgot to drop this link. shit needs

closin guys, help a nigga out... consider this an uppin...
[urlhttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=101845]Nookie vs freakyjay[/url]

many thanks peeps... :o)>

soz for free postin, but i forgot to drop this link. shit needs

closin guys, help a nigga out... consider this an uppin...
Nookie vs freakyjay

many thanks peeps... :o)>

3-0 that's a KO right??????? I win???????**************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ****************

ite nothing amazing but,

flow-7
structure-7
personals-tie
punches-7
multi-corp
openr-corp
closer-7

overall-7

7 man not bad u gota work on personals.

corp-work on your structure and flow dawg...............


plz hit this up with an honest vote now . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...566#post1029566 ................thx........pz

hmm...
i thought both were pretty weak. se7en had some good lines but there wasnt much there. no real response to what corporal said, just some random punches and a bad white boy jokes.

corporal had a few things that didnt make sense, but the punches were overall better...soo...

vote -- corporal

return the favor please --

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

yo ma make sure you hit this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...566#post1029566 ...............now.................pz