this was a really weak battle... let me break it down...

Killa Shea

iight young mike u suck at rap/
compared to my style its fuckin crap/2
wack
im the top emcee around aqui/
ull hafta see what its like when u fuck wit me/4
wack
ill rip u apart,throw a knife through your knee/
watch u bleed till u decease to live/6
wack
nobody will miss/give or forgive for what i did/
cause nobody gives a shit bout u/8
wack
does that ring any q's?
go waste a few bullets on yourself
wack

whole verse was wack, no hate at all, this is really newbie ish shit, elevate a lot, punches in direct, had no meaning, no personals, n wordplay, this isnt even a battle verse... and the flow wasnt even consistant, lacked everything...


Young Mike

who the fuck you think you talkin to//
i cant rap but wanted me your crew//
indirect
you from new york ?do you represent//
cause you got 3 wins but you still got no respect//
bad attempt at personals
in your freestyle you tryed to make look dumb//
your name killa but you dont wanna hold the gun//
trying but not working
so your thug//
then why dont new york show you love//
weak
shoot you up in chest//
watch you leak out blood till your very last breath//
wack
after all the shit you say people hate you that aint funny//
after you lose to me you'll get worse rankings then honey//
best line in battle, and it wasnt great either


it seemed young mike tried a bit harder with his verse, still really weak, but had better use of personals, stronger lines, just a more consistant verse...


im rating this out of 10...
killa shea - young mike

punches- 1/2
personals- 0/3
wordplay- 0/1
multi's- 0/1
flow- 1/2
creativity- 1/3

overall- 3/12

so young mike gets my vote...

when i get 100 posts ill come back to vote on the poll...

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Tha Breakdown-
Lines from young
who the fuck you think you talkin to//
i cant rap but wanted me your crew//
MAN U DISSED URSELF
you from new york ?do you represent//
cause you got 3 wins but you still got no respect//
HE HAS 3 LOSSES MAN
in your freestyle you tryed to make look dumb//
your name killa but you dont wanna hold the gun//
so your thug//
then why dont new york show you love//
WEAK
shoot you up in chest//
watch you leak out blood till your very last breath//
after all the shit you say people hate you that aint funny//
after you lose to me you'll get worse rankings then honey//
WEAK

Killas Lines
basically his verse was aight but both need to elevate but he pulled it out betta flow n shit made more since

My vote-Killa

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want my honest opinion? this battle was weak.

killa--
you sound like i did years ago. your lines are pointless. you go out of way and say stupid things just so it will rhyme. bad punches. horrible.

young mike--
little better. couple of decent punches in there. didnt seem too personal, but i felt you a hell of a lot more.

vote: young mike

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i got 100 posts now, but it still wont let me register my vote on the polls... so sorry guys... if you can get a mod or someone to add my vote to the poll the feel free too...

my battle with buzzkill is getting real slept on... if either of you could drop a honest vote we'd appreciate it, stay up. 1.

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this was as wack as fuck
but killa gets it cos of punches and flow.

this was as wack as fuck
but killa gets it cos of punches and flow.
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aight look good battle

killa you had good punches good vocab and structure needed some more multis in you shit and it would of kilt

young you shit was ok but your shit needed to ryme more you had some o.k punches but that was about it good battle

fairly bad bad but i give it to young mike

young- your verse was better but lacked skill and punches..work on ur metas adn elevate on the vocab...you got the flwoin process down just work off that adn keep practicin...also make ur lines less simple n more intersting

Killa-you verse lacked skill as well..no punches u and young mostly tried to go off personals and it wasnt happening 4 u this time.. Both of you have the flow part down and can madly elevate if u keep practicin.. work on ur metas, punches, maby add wordplay and multis too.. also elevate the vocab... i know it seems like a lot but just watch

so my vote=Young mike