i gotta say that Mr Write killed in this battle.

Yayo had some real played punches. The Burger King Joint for examle.
Mr. Write did everything right. He didn't really come that Hard but
he finessed the basics and therefore wins it on technical skill.
He had prsonals. Wordplay Structure Metas Sustainment and Overall Enjoyment over tony yayo so....
Vote=Tony Yayo














I'm just playing.... Mr.Write.

I took the tyme so, If you don't mind......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101920

3rd up
come on guys drop the links
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alwayz same shit, my verse wasn't bad I had more metaphors and shit, u all just dickridin' him (I'm not sayin' he was weak or some shit) but that most of y'all just vote for him cuz he been round here longer, talkin' about elevation, fuck that, I'd bet 70% up in here dropz there shit pre-written, fake ass battlers. (again I'm not sayin he did) I'm through with this fake shit.

just keep battlin man..you'll get better
believe me we both have a ways to go...

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Yayo--
Some halfway decent punches. good flow, good structure. ok.

w.rite--
some good punches...but a lot of it didnt seem personal. flow was ok...but..

vote: free yayo


return the favor....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

make this my last up....need one vote...
:thumbup:

All Right..............

Mr.Write...........Had An Better
Overall Verse Better Puns
Better Everything Good Shit
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Vote= DaCurse