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Its Iight... Its A Good Piece I Guess... Some Lines Seemed To Be Fillers and Some Seem To Hit Really Hard On The Topic...It Flowed Well And All of That So I Guess I'll Give You 7 MICS/10

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iight good lookin still taken more thoughts

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Could have been structured better, but i liked it..... I think ya did well on the writing....

5.6/10

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Its aight, you show some potential in this. I dont like how you set up the rap. Maybe be more open minded, and creative. Imagery will only make you better, just remember that. I thought it was aight. But it didnt really apeal to me...
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honest i likr it

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It was ok I'll go wit High Class in saying it has potential, but when u want 2 me and you can do a collaboration sometime dawg, welll hit me up

I liked the topic, and I was feelin' the flow, it would of probably been better if you made it longer. Also work on your structure, and vocab a bit, other-wise it was okay.

yeah dawg well get a clabiratin soon cause i got 2 years over my head i need to think

yo man i liked dis piece u know...got me tihnking bout missin u by puff back in da day....its short yeh but its nice....i think tha hook lets it down though u know...i reckon if u worked on making tha verse longer, and work on a few more and dat hook, dis wud be hot