Very dope read...

A bit too much self-pity kicking in here.

Why so depressed?

Just smoke a bowl.

Get laid.

Beat the shit outta someone.

Anyway...

Great flow, great wordplay, and real nice emotion.

Nice upwards twist at the end...

I was expecting you to break down crying, glad you didn't.

8/10

..Very nice piece...creativity was excellent..along with..your vocab,content..etc...what more can I say???...nice work..

Thanks... lol...
B2K.. how bout i beat you up.. that will make me feel better

i also replied to this on RnR
dope stuff though
reply on mine if u can

Aight

Good immagery ..nice vocab, .no rules u followed :wink: ..

Nice read..

Damn Evo ... This was a sicc drop here man ... LoL @ Rich ... That's a name I ain't heard in a while ... This piece was rich with meanin' tho ... No pun intended ... -n- I ... No pun intended ... Was really diggin' a lot of quotables in the verse man ...

cause even when i talk to myself.. still, nobody listens

my mind state has become the only kind place to go
so i find myself hiding behind thoughts.. just to lay low

vodka..as it gets mixed w/ the weeps from my eye
to drown my sorrow's along w/ tommorow's good byes
cause my future is only a wake waiting on my present to die

so the fact of the matter is... you are what society precieves
as it precedes to spoon feed you until you believe
once you do, your doomed cause they've planted thier seed
this means you are no longer you..
& have grown to be who they want you to be

Those were the "few" that stucc out to me ... Highly dope ... Great meanin' ... Scheme of this was sicc ... Added more interest to it ... But without it still woud have been dope ... Cuz the content was sicc as shit man ... Anyway ... Keep doin' wat U do while doin' U ... Meanin' keep writin' the illness ... Peace

HOT SHIT...
Evolve is one of the best
Good work..nice piece
Dope imagery....
Very enjoyable....
PROPS

Ok...

Since ya need tha pick me up...

Lifts chin, turns slightly to left

LOL^^

Mentill thanks for the break down.. appreciated

Reply to mine = (

Why?... ok fine.. hey that rhymed