RapVerse.com Community - what mic v.s Vitalz

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Originally posted by Vitalz
he agreed to battle the best and the greatest//
i knock tha pube hair off ya chest stop whackin it//

Decent Opener.

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Originally posted by Vitalz
to fully clothed bitches on trading spaces//
ya neva gonna be like Tupac Shakur//

No Sense.:wtf:

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Originally posted by Vitalz
Put the keyboard down ya shit couldnt shock a ford//
U couldnt have me stocked shot or mocked by some trial rappers//
they some style slackers with Hugh Flinks laughter//

Scheme Changed. Not Flowin.

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Originally posted by Vitalz
Fans dissappearing mamma's dont care//
they hatchin you to recieve a higher welfare//

Whack Like P-Diddy.

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Originally posted by Vitalz
hes the fat kid who loves the cake he rocks the mic//
so can afford to support his ass with a klondike//

50 Bitten.

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Originally posted by Vitalz
come on mike get in the game ya dont know how much ya lack//
you couldnt get in hittin wit ken griffeys b-ball bat//

Finally a Punch. :thumbup:

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Originally posted by Vitalz
fill ya khakis full of toxic gasses you in the back seat//
Plastic bag over your head to shed ya constant fear of conflict//

Horrible Closer.

Your Scheme Need Work, Structure Is Whack. Get Rid of Those // After Every Line. It's Annoying. Check Out Whackness Emergency Center And Read Some Of The Tuturials. There Are Alot Of Good Tips And Vet's In There To Help You.

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Originally posted by What mic
Record 0-0.. oh shit that makes you the best?
Invest in a dictionary, it'l teach you the rest

Decent Opener.

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Originally posted by What mic
And I suggest you learn to rhyme, don't waste my time
If this is how you text battle you must speak like a mime

Good Punch. Nice Delivery.

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Originally posted by What mic
I'ma make you an offer that you can't resist
I'll leave you with my old record in exchange for a kiss

Continue The Onslaught.:shoot:

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Originally posted by What mic
But before you get all hard I'ma tell it like this
Pucker up and kiss my ass cuz you my new bitch

Yup. Good Punch.

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Originally posted by What mic
And I do like to whack off to Trading spaces
Get right up in the TV screen and aim for they faces

I Hate Feeding. But This Was Funny.

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Originally posted by What mic
You happy now? You fucking clown- you ahouldnt of asked
And for the record while im doin it i slap my own ass

Meh.

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Originally posted by What mic
Ill pass on dissin you, shit you said it yourslef
Give it up bitch please and keep that shit on the shelf

Dope Closer.

Good Verse. Why Your 0-1 I Have No Clue. Keep Elevatin. Got Good Potential.

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