LOL your drop wasn't bad though... I was feelin it

and PEOPLE EXPLAIN YOUR VOTES BETTER

or don't vote at all....

HMMMM NOT BAD AT ALL...still stayin short n snappy
spit!!!!!
BREAKDOWN---**oh oh oh..dont stop-HAMMER TIME!!
punches-Spit
flow-spit
complexity-Bio
sustainment-spit
enjoyment-both
metas-spit
structure-spit
overall-Spit

clear to see here that he jus put more effort
in and that tight structure gave a good flow
pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING MAD SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236

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ur both in one of my crews...lol....so i'll vote....Bio ur first two lines were the best....the rest just flowed off and u went into that paragraph type structure....try using more up to date wordplay and punches.....personals are also nice to use....the pic line was a good personal.....but ur follow up wasn't that hard...and try ending each line with a rhyme....like u did in ur first two lines.....Spit had a harder hitting verse....and a few good personals....no hate to either of u though....here's a breakdown

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Spit
Metas - Tie
Wordplay - Tie
Punches - Spit
Flow - Spit
Structure - Spit
Personals - Tie
RhymeScheme - Spit
Overall - if Bio focuses on fixing his structure and throwing harder punches/personals with updated wordplay this would've been a much closer battle.....but Spit takes it mostly just for having harder punches....no hate to either of u though.....good read...just a vote

peace