J-durable killed him.i just know got the "put yo head between yo legs and kiss yo ass goodbye" dats a hard punch.and Namwom_69 is goin down

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Punches-J
Multies-tie
Creativity-J

J pulled away with diss one im still trippin off the tampax line.

how do i know when i won this battle.Do i have to get a certain amount of votes or sumthing?Cuz its takin a nigga a long tyme to get a "w".

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Vote:J.........................

what the fuck

unless you're the admin from planetrap (Lockz), then you're a fucking name biter.. u bit his name letter for letter LMAO... u probably bit in ur verse too...

yeah its a bit name.. letter for letter capitol for capitol and the thing going through the o.. name biter!!! lol

J-Durable

Yo you messin wit a C-R-A crooked letter to da Y //
Put yo head between yo legs and kiss yo ass goodbye //
7/10

Messin wit me dogg you cant be muthafuckin serious //
up inside yo dumb ass head things must be goin delirous //
5/10

You aint gonna win dogg you rhyme like a bitch //
Im like a roll of toilet paper i was made for diss shit //
8/10

Best recognize you fuckin wit J-durable da daygo kid //
last nigga dat took dat rode lost fuck his wig //
4/10

dats right my rhymes kill so lockz you best behave //
or yo homies will be pourin' 40's on yo fuckin grave //
6/10

Yo rhymes too anixous you bitch needs to relax //
be a man,grow a penis, and lose da tampax //
9/10

admit you suck,im da shit,my rhymes way mo' legit //
if my game was a wack as yours id drop da mic and quit //
6/10

Average = 6.4

LockZ

Use My ~Mics Blast~ To destroy Jdurables Image ~light Fast~ You Good The answers No ~Why Ask~/
Tic-Tack I use phrases simple AZ-That to blow your ASS-BACK to a wack emcee site yea www.ItzLikeThat.com/
5/10

Not A single Individual wishes to read your Long-Lasting Mind-Numbing ~prose~/
4/10
~Worst~ is imma beat you and I chose to go 24 hours ~first~/
That dosent stop me from proceeding 2 ~Burst~ Open each line in your ~Verse~ with out the assistance of a single ~curse~/
Like an emergency room patient ill leave you in seek the help of a ~nurse~/
My Lines Explode Like Fire ~Works~ Uppercut you wit punches so hard u woulda went to heaven but skipped out on ~church~/
6/10 (this all ended in rhyming words... im confused

SO you Drop Back Down fatally hit the ~ground~ ur name demolishes from the earth without a single ~sound~/
No body misses you or even wished you were even ~around~ Except me with these bars I use your body and continue to ~pound~/
You Drop a verse-and-ppl-start-to-~FROWN~ When Ppl talk about the rap game being good with talented ppl you turn there opinions ~around~/
6/10

Average = 5/10

definately change ur shit around lockz, and dont rhyme so many words in a row. but for now, j takes it.

vote - J-Durable

honest vote the battles in my sig

thanks for da love yah'll you all know who won diss battle.Lockz good effort but not good enough dogg.maybe next tyme.

j got this because of better punches and structure.but this battle sucked.
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elevate alot and ull ge tit but for now hit the WAC

i gave my honest vote on this so give ur vote on thisd please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...342#post1041342

return
the favor cuz i took the time