Uppin this for da last time. Please drop an honest vote here.............................................. .................................................. ...................

tactical had a nice opener............... periodic table nice one.. he had some coo metaphors.. it flowed alot better. the winless was a nice line. closing could have been a bit stronger.

zarbon you wre pretty much level the whole verse. nothing really stood out.. could have thrown some better punches in there.

vote= tactical good battle.