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both of them was ight verses......
if i know what the helll Daven was sayin half the time...seem like he just threw words together for the first punch....
but he came back....and lyrical is steppin up wit the flo.....but i stilll gotta go wit Daven...

vote-DAVEN MOTION

this was pretty one sided..
lyrical...your shit just didnt make much sense to me..
it was very elementary and not complex at all...
need to work on harder punhces and wordplay...

quotables=none

Daven had much better wordplay and punches...
flow was there and he was much more consistent..

quotable=But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!

had me laughing a bit here ^..

poll vote= Daven Motion..
peace

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Man this nigga go mothafuckas voting for him that knows his real name what the fuck kind of dick riding bullshit is this I mean damn I mean yo what the fuck and niggaz talking about a guy should be banned for his vote hell y'all niggaz hate me that bad.

ok heres the breakdown.....
i dont know why my crew member voted that way but its called an opion its a vote so just accept it davon...but heres the breakdown..

multis=davon.....The other guy was a little
flow=davon....ok none the less both were there but was feeling davons more
structuer=lol...davon.....all the way......not even off
Punches=Davon.....He had that shit all the way....Other guy was just played out and gay jokes....fucking lame shit
personals=davon.....Lol personals were tight for 6 verses....very nicely done....
overall=davon.................Well theres your breakdwon.......sorry for the misconveience about the vote from doc......lol....Davon got this shit.................

My vote goes to davon...
return the favor plz......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103912
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103792

aight battle......

motion.... took most category's..... wordplay.. punches....multies.....flow by a lil...i like how you called him tha wackest out of tha ppl you've battled.......

so

vote-daven motion

hit this up with an honest vote...please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103807

Last Upin.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................

opener: dm
Closer:jedi
Flow: dm
Enjoyment: Tie
VOTE: Dm easy!
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