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elevate..elevate..elevate.. this battle was kind of weak yall can improve alot with the wordplay
punchlines- anubis impact of disses- anubis metas- anubis vote anubis i spent time voting on your battle now return the favor i got a battle that needs votes heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103902 |
Well the both of you have got a little elevating to do...
I give the battle to Anubis... it's true, you did have some problems with your structure and some of your punches didn't land but you were the most effective overall.. try making all of yourl ines a punch of some sort and stay away from the hypothetical situations...make it seem like that is the way it is and not how it should/could be. Blessed you had a decent drop as well but you really need to work on beefing up the punches. Work on the multi's too, make em flow easier. You had some good lines but your verse had too much filler and your punches that did hit did so softly... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103997 I voted....You vote too. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103997 |
upping (2) UPPin need votes to close this up fast.......
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ITE MY VOTE GOES TO ANIBUS YOU CAME SIMPLE MAN BUT IT WORKED..........NICE FLOW JUST WORK ON YOUR PUNCHES AND STRUCTURE.
MAKE SURE YOU HIT THIS UP NOW http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...135#post1055135 ...THX............PZ |
i typed that shit soo fast i was so late with my verse it wasnt even funny but still.......
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...135#post1055135 plz honest vote......................pz
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Uppin tryin to finish this battle up
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i got to give to anubis you both could have came harder but fuck it stay focused
vote- anubis............................................ .........go check my battle from last night i still need vote its tords the bottom of front lines telekenetic vs def-star. come vote anybody. |
Uppin it still im waiting to close this.....
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uppin to close this battle people vote people vote!!!!!!!!
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with better flow puches and vocab gotta go wit anubis
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bout fuckin time shit i hate regular frontlines shit is dead and peeps dont vote
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anubis got dis one he had better flows, vocab, and punchlines.
vote anubis hit dis up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412 |
killas verse
i abuse this , lyrical bitch named anubis cuz i spit rhymes so powerful that they could move bricks 4/10 i hit ya wit weapons and leave a bruise up in ya brain I can tell that ya a rookie cuz anub(newb) is in ya name 5/10 and ur rhymes are whack u sound like a babbling hoe cuz this cat da Blessed Killah is a battling pro 5/10 and right now im drinkin bud u know the king of beers i saw anubis on the run and said now thats the king of queers 3/10 and ill ill fukin kill u faggot,watch i grip my missles tight and i smoke the finest weed that got more crystals than ya ice 4/10 and i regret the shit i dead my own pain is on my chest cuz i look in the mirror this herbs chain is on my neck 4/10 u dont know gangsta son ur like a hood rook Ur moms wanted to give me head so i asked " r u a good cook" in battles they say im hard to put down im like a good book 3/10 28/70 Anubis Verse On This I Leave Keys Toasted... Fracture Ya Skill Put ya Brains Through Ostioperosis... 6/10 Tellin Me Pace it Please...Rapatious Speeds... Reason Why Anubis Momentious Hypothesis...Hangs Degreez... 6/10 Da Ble$$ed Killa Blessed With No Skills... Kis Know Feel Fucked!... Just Like His Ass Feels... 6/10 Ill Leave Ya Corpse Lifeless...With The Mic In Hand... Like Frontline Feeble Posted...Your Bout To Be Banned... 6/10 One In The Neck One In The Temple... Fuck Keys Ill Woop Yo Ass Without Speakin On The Instrumental... 7/10 Gangin To Pull...Down Like Floats Murder On Boats Was All This Fag Quotes... Plots Consumed...Yea Your Gonna Get A Visit From The One And Only Doctor *Doom*... 5/10 Crush Ya Team... With My Collidic Cryogenic Beams... Blessed Ya Life Is Up It Seems... So Stop Ya Merkin Dream... Before You Get Ripped Like Seams... 7/10 45/70 Vote-Anubis redo tha favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100189 |
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