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Structure- C Flow-C Personals-TP Punches-Tie Multis-C Closer-C Vocab-C That was just my opionion, no hate! Return da fava http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103798 |
okay you guys are mad that your battles are getting sleped on.. now im a vote on this shit but if i dont get my battles voted on im never going to vote on yalls battles again
Aiight im a break it down line for line CAsualities verse Profit huh? Should have seen this come’n Well? I see in your future a scared bitch runnin I'll have you witnessing you own death like you swapped brains with Cleo(Tells the future) with rhymes this lethal casualty will always remain unequalled Aight disses nothing special You spit rhymes with lines that make P. Diddy crap shine I could spit with no punches and you still couldnt touch mines Hitting profit like a hallucination, its time you start facin you couldnt be blazin if your rhymes were watched like star gazing Pretty weak wordplay you can step up your wordplay a little better next time I've mastered these forces, I smash you and leave you nauseous fuck spittin heat, I spit flames like I'm equipped with torches Nice wordplay I split wigs with axes, knockin you off your axis with cannons blasting, proven anti-passive you'll be leaving in a casket Overall: this verse aint have anyting that really had me saying ooh or ahh.. you could have used better more creative punchlines in this battle.. your verse was pretty much basic man.. the only punchlines i saw that you had was that shit bout cleo pretty basic verse.. ill give that shit a 4.5/10 Other verse look this is the part were everyone wonders who will win/ Stepping in this thread will get you erased before u start postin/ Sorry this was a weak opener to a verse.. plus win and postin dont even rhyme Cuz im a lyrical genious on the mike and will rip you to bits/ Masterbaiting to porno movies called "Booties and tits"/ Pure weakness man shits played But im about to make a murder scene and end this guys misery/ leaving the scene and people wonder if it was a bloody casualty/ Turning this bitch inside out and ripping out his spinal cord/ jack in the box didnt even pop out once with a song for short/ no disses in these lines man like me wondering how the hell im going against a lone stranger/ Leaving trails of blood from fights wit his icon "power ranger"/ including his sig. tells his whole truth and concepts/ Wondering how the hell he got banned for just postin nonsense/ his bio is useless didnt find one trace of something i could use/ Must be someone that was born with abuse/didnt wanna reaveal his whole truce/ best part of the verse nice personal disses Now its time to end this herb and end is damn misery and send him to hell/Might as well join him.....Im going there as well/ Overall played verse some lines aint even rhyme VOTE: im voting for casuality on this one he had a little better wordplay.. both of yall could elevate alot i spent time voting on your battle.. so do the same hit up these 2 battles i got going http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=103902 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103517 |
Thanx fo the HElp I will try to fix that
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This is what i thought and all the votes against the propohet were very laid out and nice...But there wrong...Cuz i know whats a good flow...anyhow heres my opinion....
look this is the part were everyone wonders who will win/ Stepping in this thread will get you erased before u start postin/ Ok this was very well good for the start...Rhymes also. Cuz im a lyrical genious on the mike and will rip you to bits/ Masterbaiting to porno movies called "Booties and tits"/ lame....thats all im saying But im about to make a murder scene and end this guys misery/ leaving the scene and people wonder if it was a bloody casualty/ Turning this bitch inside out and ripping out his spinal cord/ jack in the box didnt even pop out once with a song for short/ like me wondering how the hell im going against a lone stranger/ Leaving trails of blood from fights wit his icon "power ranger"/ including his sig. tells his whole truth and concepts/ Wondering how the hell he got banned for just postin nonsense/ his bio is useless didnt find one trace of something i could use/ Must be someone that was born with abuse/didnt wanna reaveal his whole truce/ Now its time to end this herb and end is damn misery and send him to hell/Might as well join him.....Im going there as well/ But yeah..............Ill end the fix up up....shit....forgot something |
Dude who did you vote for
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yo thanks alot for voting in my battle.. i guess thats what i get for spending time voting in someones battle that wont even return the favor
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ok so i forgot to finish it but i will now....
look this is the part were everyone wonders who will win/ Stepping in this thread will get you erased before u start postin/ Good start Rhymes to....^the idiot up there doensnt know shit..dumb herb Cuz im a lyrical genious on the mike and will rip you to bits/ Masterbaiting to porno movies called "Booties and tits"/ Lame But im about to make a murder scene and end this guys misery/ leaving the scene and people wonder if it was a bloody casualty/ nice punchline....Could have been better Turning this bitch inside out and ripping out his spinal cord/ jack in the box didnt even pop out once with a song for short/ ouch nastiness...very nice...coudl have been better though like me wondering how the hell im going against a lone stranger/ Leaving trails of blood from fights wit his icon "power ranger"/ what was this all about? including his sig. tells his whole truth and concepts/ Wondering how the hell he got banned for just postin nonsense/ Very good punch. i was feeling dis his bio is useless didnt find one trace of something i could use/ Must be someone that was born with abuse/didnt wanna reaveal his whole truce/ Mutis and a good punch...Good But could have been better Now its time to end this herb and end is damn misery and send him to hell/Might as well join him.....Im going there as well/ Very good closer. Ok so far i like prophets....next......... Profit huh? Should have seen this come’n Well? I see in your future a scared bitch runnin Ok ive seen to many disses about his name...still doesnt make sense...Try harder I'll have you witnessing you own death like you swapped brains with Cleo(Tells the future) with rhymes this lethal casualty will always remain unequalled Ok punchline could have been better You spit rhymes with lines that make P. Diddy crap shine I could spit with no punches and you still couldnt touch mines Very usual ....Not good enough....i think it was lame... Hitting profit like a hallucination, its time you start facin you couldnt be blazin if your rhymes were watched like star gazing Nice punchline....Maybe if it had more sense i would understand it I've mastered these forces, I smash you and leave you nauseous fuck spittin heat, I spit flames like I'm equipped with torches well...A weak punchline and hardly a diss....Ur talking about yourself I split wigs with axes, knockin you off your axis with cannons blasting, proven anti-passive you'll be leaving in a casket ok closer....Wheres the rest? Ok? Ok the winner goes to the prophet.....Sorry no hate...He got this all the way...all the votes agaisnt him were probably dick ryders and lame herbs taht dont know what a good flow is...My vote goes to prophet....peace |
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okay you guys are mad that your battles are getting sleped on.. now im a vote on this shit but if i dont get my battles voted on im never going to vote on yalls battles again ..........etc [B]Overall played verse some lines aint even rhyme ^this guy is a herb....I owned him on my other accoutn and got 5 wins....Im not telling...But yeah....Herb dick ryhder vote...Learn how to rhyme yourself noob |
oh i thougt that was bombz...Nm but yeah ur a herb to......lol...How in the hell u got 3 wins ....lol you got buch of dick ryders and herb votes eh nicely done
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who the fuck are you bitch?no ones beaten me on this site yet............................................... .................................................. .............
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stfu joob i didnt mean u i meant bombz ...But you suck to i read ur shit. Ur shit hardly rhymes also. and who the hell u think this is dumbass...Read the name...take a slight clue?
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red most battles of prophet and his right, people always say the same...
i felt like i have read that over and over... prophet made good punches and have a better overall vote, theprophet777 |
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aight...
casualty-- you had pretty good wordplay (miss cleo line, etc.) but you gotta have better punches. it seemed like you didnt really have anything to say...just kinda forcing rhymes and such. the insults gotta be better to win. prophet-- pretty good verse, got some decent wordplay in there. the punches could have better, but the thing about there being nothing in his profile for personals was good. if the punches were a little better, this would have been an awesome verse. vote: prophet check the sig.... |
^another dickriding crew vote.............................................. .................................................. ..
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