Uppin htis for the kids
This been open for so long
Shit....................................
Ya'll like the true meaning of
............'Bed Rock'...........

Myster

IN THIS BATTLE YOU A RATTLE AND I KNOW THAT U SHOOK
UR RHYMES SOUND LIKE SHIT OUT A NURSERY BOOK/
Not a bad opening...
JUST LOOK I KNOW UR ENLISTED~ AS THE LISTED ~ON EVERYONES HITLIST/
U BITCHEN JUST LISTEN
I CAN HERE YO ASS SCREAM ~SHITTIN YA LIFE LIKE A PIGEON/
Hmm....not the greatest
WITH YA GIRL IN THE KITCHEN...MOANIN AND GROANIN... WISHIN
THAT IT WAS U IN THE WINDOWS REFLECTION/
BUT U THE ONE REFUSIN TO GET A AIDS INSPECTION
HOWS REJECTION//
Not a very good punch
NAW FUCK IT HOW IS A MURDA FUCK DETECTION
BITCH NOBODY CARES/
IM OUT THIS BATTLE WIT VOTES MAKIN ME THE HEIR
Blah....not the greatest closer

Myster you need to work on ya punches...fix ya struct and work on ya flow. I didnt know which lines were wich


Listed

see, im back in this. and now i gots to educate
your punkass cause from jr. high you didn't graduate
If thats a personal its a good opening
i just kick it like this, see you panic and drown
slap back your wack rap attack and lay it down
lay off the multis, they mean shit
now listen real close fool, i'm bout to hatch my plan
i'll pronnunciate slow so you can understand
Not really a punch
see i might be new, and yo, i aint no felon
but still i'm bustin' back, shootin' lyrical venom
Work on ya punches
my shit says 0-1, and just about to be even
i say mysterioso has issues and about to be leavein'
Dont get it...
feels good, don't it G. gettin' merked like this
i'll do you worse than that fool ILLunatic did
Who did what to Ill, dont get it
and, check this fool, you see, i already won
DQ'ed like a mug, but i'll finish for fun
Whys he gon get dq'd?...wack
the rules say 15 lines and no less, a fuckin' easy amount
come back and try again when you learn how to count
Finally..i decent punch


Overall - Listed....he won this battle wit 2 punches...it was very close because alot of his stuff didnt make sence but it came down to him winning

both of you work on ya punches

Listed: your verse was well above average for front lines material. this is not saying much, however. Your lyrics were definitely the harder hitting in this battle. you need to work on more original concepts. the best way to elevate is to read others material. if you do this then i guarantee you wont use half as much played stuff thats not interesting to people.

Mysteriosa: you definitely need a bit more work than does the listed. your piece id say was average front lines material. try to get some personals in on your opponent or some wittier punches. hey, remember - practice makes perfect.. nobody will ever be perfect but keep trying. and dont type in caps, its annoying.

Listed, The...
Dont Private Message me
Talkin shit......................
Sayin you wanna battle?
I'm not fuckin with newbies...
Go find someone else to lose to

TIED UP 1-1 LETS GET VOTES COMIN IN................................................ .................................................. ..........

why you so interested in this battle ILL? if im just a newbie, so's MYST. get the fuck out of my grill if i offend your thick-headed ass so much.

^ Got a big mouth
But i'm gonna be the
Bigger Net man
And click away............
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Tied Up 1-1 Lets Get Some Votes In

vote listed.......<- u came with mad filler at first and ya shit wasn't hittin but then ya pulled it of in the end

mysterioso....you had alot of played punches with a choppy flow...n yaconcepts need some originality....keep workin on ya ish N you'll get it right....

oh i forgot.....lmao......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106083........can y'all return the fav please??.......thanx it's appreciated..

Listed took it structure, flow shit every category....
other guy had shitty rhyme scheme n punches about ya girl
those are dumb shit punches use a personal or a good metafor...
my vote Listed...
yall vote honestly on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106389
thanX...
Pz....

the bigger NET man, maybe. but the bigger MAN man would have never started talking shit in the first place over the use of a name in a flow. what are you fucking 12 years old?

LMFAO.. Kid are you serious...
Sensless beef... pure fun........
All it was... quit takin net shit seriously
Get a fuckin life.......................

nah, nah, nah ILL. you got it twisted a little bit. i challenged you to a battle in
pm, and you come up all hard like you gonna beat me anyways. don't doubt what you aint seen to the fullest. so how bout i do it here, where everyone can see. You and me ILL. lets throw down. don't be scared. Think of it like this, if you win. one more notch for you, plus gloating rights. c'mon fool, battle another newbie besides MYST for a change.

U Tryin To Ho Me Nigga?

Wit That Lil Line Bout Him Beatin Me?............................................... ........................................