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This was a good battle.
Center: Your verse was pretty good......you structured it pretty well i thought.......you had some nice multies through out the piece, i liked that.....flow was good...you had some alright punches, none that really hit hard i thought. ILL: You had a good verse, the better one i thought....Your structure was ok, could use work though.....flow was decent in it....had some multies but not as good as Center....but you did have the better punches i thought. Overall this was a good battle...but my vote goes to ILL, he had better punches. |
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Center Sight
ya must live near my punches, i know they down to go there cuz the one to knock you outs.. bout to 'come out of nowhere' not to good..weak punch theres no need to continue, but i guess i'll saddle it through even tho its no secret that this cats 17-2.. from battling newbs No hes not, ive seen his battles..fake personals are wack always babbling too.. ya punches suck & ya flows even worse & its not funny.. yet i die of laughter everytime i read a verse You dropped first...so u couldnt see his verse...wack knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control No diss...just self shit...ok though theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer played...so-so closer ILLunatic 7-1... ... ...Obviously your over-rated cuz your too weak and cant stand my heat ... ...Killed in line of defeat, Center Sight's punches couldn't hit if played in repeat Good opening...good punch and creative Actually thinkin he's got me beat... but nah cuz this bitch couldn't handle my flow ...Shoulda killed him along time ago, ugh oh, did center sight just call me a hoe? LMAO....funny line....cuz that hoe shit he did was wack ...That was a mistake, kid just take a break, cuz its hard when ya rhymes is fake For goodness sake, look at this skank, He's 7-1? he must be in tha reversed rank Good Punch...creative ... ... ...Ya claim ya 1st loss came from DQ, well bitch i really wouldn't wanna be you Cuz after the punches i spit hit you, you mind as well be called casper cuz ya see-through Kinda Played...but creative Center Sight Who??? Oh the kid i just ripped with sin and threw out to tha recycle bin... Well...Do ya feel tha pain? cuz i already feel tha win, wanna go....well... lets do it again Played... Overall - ILLunatic...his punches hit harder and his verse was more creative |
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Center- come out pretty strong but I didnt think the puches were all there
"knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control" Good line but no punch "theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer" Very weak closer I liked your opener tho ILL-Came strong flow was off at times kinda like you forced it a little tryin to add to much shit in ya verse makes it sound a little cluttered. You had some dope punches and multis tho Your opener funny and was strong I liked it You stayed strong threwout and your verse was pretty damn funny OVERALL- ILL He had better punches Center's were a little weak But a good battle none the less Even tho I cant poll vote I still took some time to give feed back an up this post so do me the favor of voting on my shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104380 An this one has been slept on bad http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103568 Thanks |
I think illunatic killed this bird!
his punches were much better, and some of the verses of centre didnt rhymed at all! please vote on these battle, at least the 2 battlers in here! 4th day and just 1 fucking vote! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1046442 |
no location? hmm..
ya must live near my punches, i know they down to go there cuz the one to knock you outs.. bout to 'come out of nowhere' theres no need to continue, but i guess i'll saddle it through even tho its no secret that this cats 17-2.. from battling newbs always babbling too.. ya punches suck & ya flows even worse & its not funny.. yet i die of laughter everytime i read a verse knock ya teeth in first.. think your hot..? you'll come to fold cuz its known how Center got 'heat on lock'.. like gun control theres truth in my speech ILL's weak.. so dont hand me armor cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer _____________________________________________ This was dope...^ Nice werdplay and decent flow... ok punches... kinda ok personals... overall it was a good battle verse... _________________________________________ 7-1... ... ...Obviously your over-rated cuz your too weak and cant stand my heat ... ...Killed in line of defeat, Center Sight's punches couldn't hit if played in repeat Actually thinkin he's got me beat... but nah cuz this bitch couldn't handle my flow ...Shoulda killed him along time ago, ugh oh, did center sight just call me a hoe? ...That was a mistake, kid just take a break, cuz its hard when ya rhymes is fake For goodness sake, look at this skank, He's 7-1? he must be in tha reversed rank ... ... ...Ya claim ya 1st loss came from DQ, well bitch i really wouldn't wanna be you Cuz after the punches i spit hit you, you mind as well be called casper cuz ya see-through Center Sight Who??? Oh the kid i just ripped with sin and threw out to tha recycle bin... Well...Do ya feel tha pain? cuz i already feel tha win, wanna go....well... lets do it again _______________________________________ yo this was very nice... kinda Stretched bars...but dope shit... hard hitting punches... hard hitting personals... good and fly werdplay...nice style... well ima vote for ILL cuz came with more Effort... _________________________________________ peace... |
Punches: Center Sight
Flow:Center Multis: Neither Personals: Center Creativity: Ill Wordplay: Ill Vote - Center cuz im bout to toss this fuckin hoe - like i was an angry farmer You'd think this line would be played, but I've never heard it before, so good job. Decent battle. Please vote on my battle, in the sig |
^ Is that another dick ryder?
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ILLunatic - Vote
LOL Major Dickriding Here..ILL Just Had The Advantage Over Center Sight..He Just Had A Better Flow, And His Verse Was More Complex With The Punchlines..Center Came Out n00bie Ish With Some Weak Punchlines..So I Think ILL Won This By Better Punchlines And More Complexitiy Inside Of His Verse... |
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