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anyway, limitz was pure shit, so it gets this
vote, vote, vote!!http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1046442 |
aight. rapper, vote for somebody damnit. and dont post here if u cant poll!! uppin # 3...................
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Yo Fucken newbs with there gay posts...lol...
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This was a close battle. Both came strong. I felt that Its stuff was easier to flow with, and hit harder. Perosnals were pretty lame by both.. but not a bad battle
vote - it plz return a honest fev http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104606 |
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I'm a say It took this for better structure, for sure.
The punches were tighter, the wordplay was aight, and the flow was definately on mark. Limitz... Well, aside from the shitty format, you did ok. I'd work on punching more... And stop forcing your wordplay... Some of that shit barely made sense. Not everything has to be a, "like"...(meta) And you certainly don't need to capitalize shit up in there. Overall you didn't come bad, just need work, especially personal punching, even if it's just playing off his name. You need to let us know in some way, shape, or form... That this was meant for him and not some kinda pre-write. I"mnot accusing you of anything, just saying when there are personals, it helps like a motherfucker. Peace |
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Limitz - As said, an okay verse for a first attempt or whateva.. very stretched lines messed the flow up alot tho... It seemed like you were being to complex at times while not putting it across properly... punches didn't connect really...
It - Again, the lines seemed slightly stretched, but the punches worked well, some good hits throughout.. nice p ersonals, the t.h.u.g reference etc... nicely done... overall better in most catergorys... Vote - It Return the favour with an honest vote - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104125 |
if i could vote it would be Limitz i didnt like I.T. word play.
you go dog keep rippin up indy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
thought the structure of both verses was pretty bad... not very good flow, tho ITs was better.... punches i give to IT, they were stronger... and wordplay, tho limitz verse was more creative,...but weighed up, ITs tips the balance...vote=IT....pZ
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