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-   -   007 [Vs.] Twizzle (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=104641)

Dadi Kewl 01-09-04 07:04 AM

Uppin this...................
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menolin 01-09-04 02:28 PM

uppin y'all............................................. .................................................. ......................

Dadi Kewl 01-09-04 05:36 PM

Come on i vote on yall shit...
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Dadi Kewl 01-10-04 10:15 AM

Up

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Dadi Kewl 01-12-04 03:22 PM

Uppers.




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:) 01-12-04 03:35 PM

dadi kwelis verse

Started Battling again, Left SS because he was str8 wack
Attempted to write emotionally...and had a heart attack
eatin Mc's? kid's just a snack, i'll leave you wrecked
I'll smack you into celestial orbit...
...and gladly forget your dialect
good flow with these lines


Got respect?...hell no, no-one know's or gives a fuck who you are
And when it comes to verses...
you own more stretch lines than an atkin's diet Bizzare..
nice creative line.. punchline hit pretty hard

Hurrah! hunting you the fuck down like english upper classes
And when it comes to gaybar's...you got all the backstage passes
Now This n00b is done..sonned like the rest w/ no regret
Only thing is, your so wack this is the only W that i'll forget...

overall this was a pretty good verse i give this shit a 7/10

007's verse

i suppose i need to try, against some one with 34 wins,
off me you gets sword n axes, instead of needles n pins,
weak oppener to a battle

i spit like a wordsearch, an keep ya scrambled an confused,
shift, an '/' is what i make of your punches, u got no pimp juice,
there was no, battle callout, just permisson to be beat,
a name like twizzle stix, ur not keepin ur wackness discrete,
the wordplay in these lines were pretty basic and elementary... you could have had better disses than these


your lines are never on track, after i de-rail ur train of thought,
girls love you, playin tennis, is the only time he gets to court*
like shootin stars, it aint long till you completely vanish,
if i were the leader of wits end, you position i wud banish.


overall i didnt really like this verse at all you aint have that many hard dissing punchlines in this battle most of your disses.. were pretty basic.. and your wordplay could have been much better.. i give that verse a 4/10


VOTE: i got to vote for dadi kweli in this battle he had better wordplay and more creative disses than 007 had

Dadi Kewl 01-12-04 05:37 PM

Can a mod edit that vote in.... ;) Cheers Ed

Uppers......
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:) 01-12-04 07:06 PM

how do you even become a registered voter in here.............................................. .................................................. ..........

Dustin Dubree 01-12-04 07:32 PM

ounches twizz: his punches hit harder than 007 good verse
metas twiz:you own more stretch lines than an atkin's diet Bizzare..
multies neither: you both should include some in your battles more often
personals twiz: Started Battling again, Left SS because he was str8 wack

overall i gotta go wit twiz

both please drop a honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103266

Feeble Minded 01-12-04 07:33 PM

twizzle loses for excessive uppin. sorry twizzle but everyone has to follow the same rules. you know better.............

Dadi Kewl 01-12-04 07:49 PM

aigh...
I'm just pissed that i vote in plenty of others then get none
in my own....

But yea...
Pz.

Token 01-15-04 11:23 AM

^ Yep.. sorry but I gotta do it.

Twizzle DQed.


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