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Emotion 01-16-04 07:21 AM

wholly shit man this was dope cant wwait till i c ure collab verse

This was all good it was packed with quotables my fav was prolly this line

Perspectives of my lifes emotions constantly denied to believe
Declare everything normal as I choke everytime I try to breath

Very deep line, And i love deep shit,

Nice flow, - very nice had good internals, and u have a great ryme scheme

Nice lines here

So I concentrate on whats good but it leaves a blank page
Against evil loves a puberty issue..it's just another stage

Mmmmm lately i have been tryin to think of something positive to write about but its nearly impossible

Dope peice

rule 01-24-04 02:08 PM

uppen for some feedback...it's long but i think you'll enjoy it..

rule 01-25-04 10:10 AM

bein slept on...


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