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Return tha favor and hit this wit' an honest vote, or input on tha battle, at least uppin.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103166 Best line in tha battle: "with words, you rhymes stink like a guy, about to get curbed," -Rhyme Punches- Dev -a lil' weak, but it was close Flow- Rhyme -worked better for me, less choppy than Dev Creativity- Rhyme -liked tha 'curb' line (Most people PROB'LY missed that one, Rhyme) Multis- Neither Opener- Dev -HAD a snap, even if not a hard hit. Rhyme didn't. Closer- Dev -needs ALOTTA work, but again, you HAD a punch in closing, Rhyme didn't. Enjoyment- Rhyme Punches-Dev Flow-Rhyme Word Play-Neither Overall- Wit categories, it's a tie, but Rhyme barely edged this one. I felt his shit a lil more. Keep elevatin'..............................1 |
Dev Took This In Every Aspect. . His Punches Hit Harder, Rhyme Tyme. . Your Verse Was Played And Weak. . Atleast Try To Use Some Played Punches That Actually Hit Hard. . Vote - Dev.
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Fuck RhymeTyme, I done said this shit as a joke… got balls to bite
With your sorta skillz…. Can’t hold ya dick never mind a mic! Ya try’na fight…. But like the blind who’s try’na write Ya wanna start reading brail… cos like them ya aint in the light! Ya in the shadows like a ghost… in fact have ya got one? Whys that, ya ask?… cos if ya have send him back, where he’s got from! Cos this 16 year old child from Kentucky... hes barely old enough to work at 60ish posts should take it easy… ignore that, ya couldn’t get any worse! I would rehearse ya dialect… try an add something worth while Cos at the minute the ‘Tyme’ to ‘rhyme’ for you… is like the Mona-Lisa try’na smile! ___________________________________________ aight............................................. ........8/10 verse ratio........... nice wordplay.......................................... ... good ryme scene............................................. ..... decent and overall good punches and personals...................... _____________________________________________ yo, yo Dev, if that is really yo name, I'm going to put your alias to lethal lyricist shame, your rhymes, are wack, when you pull the back attack, you get smacked, on crack, and then, you get jacked, trying to pull a another one, when I'm not lookin, after i post my rhyme we'll see what this motherfucker was cookin', if he isnt slow, the rhyme may get you shooken, cause i know you cant write, all those rhymes have been tooken, dev, you're blind to my ability, you got no agility, with words, you rhymes stink like a guy, about to get curbed, but anyways, you need to go back to the burbs, you need to be battlin all the noobies and herbs ________________________________________ aight............................................. ..................7/10........... nice metas............................................. .......... ok punches........................................... .................... overall decent verse........................................... but lacked creativity........................................ .......... _____________________________________ Vote/dev..............................aight peace................................. |
dev won this one hands down, basically because his verse was good and not simple like rhymes shit, rt had the multi's but it wasnt enought, they didnt go good together, just sounded good
and since this is text the more complext verse wins vote dev hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105465 |
Punches- Deva
Flow- Deva Creativity- Deva Multis- Deva Opener- Deva Closer- Deva Enjoyment- Deva Punches-Deva Flow-Deva Wurd Play-Deva Overall-Deva shit was better put ttogether nice lines an punhces feelin his verse way more tehn other dudes it aint time to rhyme for rhyme time. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php? s=&threadid=105427 ^6can u hit this up ineed sum honest votes.. claim i bit but i didnt bite shit sumone bit from me so vote honestly....shit will be delted wit plz..i came wit sum hard shit u mite liek...pc.. |
final upp... lets get this shit finished..... holla and ill return the favour...honestly obviously....pZ.....
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obvously deva had this shyt..yo deva if i could vote it would be 4 u................................................. .................................
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This Was An OK Battle Pretty 1 Sided But Any Way Dev Took It With The Punches,Wordplay,Multie Etc...
Vote=Dev Can Ya'll Vote On This??..IF SO THEN I WILL POLL VOTE http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102778 |
wack ass battle.. however dev outclassed rhyme tyme in nearly every category... rhyme tyme your verse was basically mostly filler you lacked any tight punchlines
dev sonned this dude with better dissed and punchlines vote-dev |
damn, nice battle ya'll, but i gotta give it to DEV on this one the mona lisa line killed him, i like the punches and wordplay, noth had a good battle but i cant vote so it dont matter right now,,,,, just my 2 cents.............. would yall drop a vote on this one for a couple new mcs
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105641 |
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