uppin #3 vote peeps...


could u plz drop an honest vote on this one....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...73&pagenumber=2

gazeebo won
it was a close battle though
king crunch u need to elevate
gazeebo had better punches

Decent Battle But i Go With Gazeebo He Had An Overall Better Verse And Other Kid Aint Really Do Nothin But Rap About Hisself YOU GOTTA STAY FOCUSED.....

Vote=Gazeebo

nice battle im a break it down line for line

king crunches verse
You say it bad but i said-it-worse, you know sitting behind his computer's the only way ya get 'Mega-Hurtz'/
get left with a severed-verse, its like ya styles stuck on unemployment, cuz gazeebo it "never-works"//
lol! damn ill ass punchline one of the illest shits ive seen on a rap board before


You couldnt be professonal if you got a rappin degree at NYU/
Battling me's like undiagnosed patients, "what the hell is wrong-with-you?"//
clever lines

kid's not-in-the-'right-mind' what did you type-blind?/
look-and-you-might-find, only the strings to gazeebo tampons were taken-for-"tight-lines"//
lol.. nice use of mulites and dissed.. plus it flowed well


You-known like masturbating midgets, always been 'wack-and-lesser'/
While i act like strokes and "grab-with-pressure"//
played out line.. if i see another line bout midgets and sex im going to throw up


Dawg you tryin to get crazy is just usin the 'wrong-violence/
you claim an ill block but know its in LONG ISLAND//haha he was clownin on long island
weak.. there wasnt a hard diss in this line at all

I know theres this big east west fued/cause in NY you say dawg in La we say dude/I chew up NYPD and let the pork spew/ You "CRACK" me up boi, if i wanna elevate ill jus "SNORT" you//

weak closer to a verse

overall you started off tight in this verse.. but kind of fell off that line about your style must be unemployed cuz it never works was tight.. i give this verse a 6.5/10

gazeebos verse

You really shouldnt battle someone you can't handle/
You'll get dismantled and ripped to shambles, This kid will get cold feet like walkin through Iceland in sandles/
aiight nothing real mindblowing but still a pretty aiight diss

I Shoulda battled a pro, this MC's not worthy/
Flows is shunned, passed by, Nomads rather go thirsty/
Perdition worthy spits jumpin out the voice box of this rookie/
Spit fire all you want, I'm forever raw, you can't cook me/
first couple lines were wack ass hell but the last line was pretty decent


Like Tony Hawk's Pro Skater, I'm makin' this emcee Feeble/
The Only way you be labled sick...is at the home for diseased people/
this line was kind of played plus i think that ive seen it somewhere before i dont know if you bit but the shit didnt hit that hard


The only way you'd spit fire.....is if I ignited your lips/
You winnin won't happen.....like bloods celebrating a holiday wit crypts/
the last line about blood celebrating with cryps was corny as fuck

This cat's not hard......pushin 3 inch heeled Stilletos/
His intelligence level is that of a white guy lookin for directions in the ghetto/
You steppin to the stage......not knowin what rap is about/
You still couldn't spit solid even wit dry cement in ya mouth/
Without a choice, this kid was chosen to be celebic, he spits for the hell of it/
You could put prostetic legs at a supermarket but still couldn't sell a kick/

overall this line had alot of weak lines.. i wasnt really feeling much of it i give you a 5/10 for this



vote: my vote goes to king crunch on this battle he came alot more witty and had less corny lines than gazeebo did.. vote king crunch

Hm, this is a close one. King Crunch came more creative. Gazeebo's was easier to read, which is definitely a plus. Crunch had the dashes- in his verse.. i guess to designate multis, even where there wasn't a multi...

I'ma Vote for Crunch cuz his verse stood out more. Honestly, this could go either way, good verse both of ya.

King crunch had a better verse....
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However, since some of those lines were bitten, my vote goes to gazeebo.
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http://www.planetrap.net/forums/sho...?threadid=16372


the mega hurtz line, the undiagnosed patients line, and the never works line are all bitten from there.

ohh shit your right man the shit was bitten ass fuck.. i should report this dude .................................................. .................................................. ................

neither of yous had any structure
this was garbage
okay punches
nothing spectacular

my vote goes to gazeebo for better structure and and overall better verse