heres how i see it

blak woods got this for sure

mel man came with shit and blak woods came hard and presented a hott verse

blak wins for better personals punches and flow

my vote-woods

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i took the time to vote on this so please return the favor

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i unno this battle was whack.....weak lines from both.....blak's more complex.....better structure...more dissing.....little bit of wordplay.....little bit of punches.....Mel lacked most catagories......
vote - blak

punches i guees blak his were better none of mel mans were really good
opener blak mels was corny
closer tie neither wre really good
vote blak both need to elevate
both need to work on evening their lines especially mel
more personals for both
keep postin

Here's how I saw this one.

Flow=Blak, his flow was much better, it was an easier read and just flowed better over all. Mel, you need to work on your flow a bit, it was kind of messed up.

Punches=Blak, his punches hit harder and were more creative. Mel, you mostly did gangster rap stuff which doesn't really win battles, you have to be creative in a battle not just talk about killing the other guy.

Personals=Blak, his personals were better, I didn't see any real good personals from either, but Blak's were better over all. You should both work on personals some, just because good personals can win you a battle.

Vocab=Tie, you both had some okay vocab in there. You both could still elevate in this area but over all it was pretty good.

Over all=Blak, you had a pretty nice verse, you had good punches, personals, vocab, and flow, you can still get better in all of those areas but for the most part it was pretty good, I'd say you should work on your flow the most, it was a bit off.
Mel, You seemed to focus on gangster rap type of stuff, you need to work on throwing punches, and personals that will make people think it's funny, you know witty type of stuff, and you should work on your flow, it was kind of off, your vocab was probably your best area.

Vote=Blak

Hey, vote on my battles, I took time on your battle just return the favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625

flow -i`ll say that woods got the flow down more consistant
he had much better rhymescene,came original in a sense of mind
melman had lines rhyming like clapping and mapping which is half assed
punchesboth had ok punches but i felt that woods had his lil more directed
they were a little more creative and shit like that noah mean
melmans were a lil choppy but he had the right mind frame but didnt deliver
personals i`d say this catagorie was basicly tie but woods wordplay was better when mixing in wit personals
structure goes to woods,wasnt the best struc but had more filler than melman
vote/woods




hit up 1 of my battles woods in return the favor please,thanks man

Mel-man
you were easily out done no good punches bad flow.......ect
ya need to elevate dawg
blak woods well done i really liked your shit it was good as keep it up
sounded good
nice flow
good personals
vote goes to blak woods
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VOTE ON THIS ITS GETTING SLEPT ON
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113549

Blak Got this shit..
Homie came wit better disses..and what the isa Mutha Fucka that's Blaq Gun say DUDE..LoL..any way..
Vote Blak..
he had betta Disses and Vocab plus it was Funnier..the Other kid had to simple of a Verse...mel...your ryme scheme wasnt very stong...Blak had a Better flow to it when readin the shit..

Please RETURN the FAVOR and droppa VOTE. My battles are getting mad SLEPT on.

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