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Orikle 01-11-04 07:10 PM

Nice beat ay..Hook is pretty nice..Gotta agree with Absymal though..the topic is played out as fuck...gets fucken boring to listen to like I really can't be bothered to listen to it which is why I will stop it..However, the flow, delivery and production is all of good quality so maintain all that but find some real content..pz..

PostMan 01-11-04 08:33 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Jay-O
Listenin'...
... Intro Is Low As Fuck...
Quality Is Good...
... Hook Is Coo'...
Vocals Are A Lil' Low...
... Flow Is Iight, Could Be Better...
Some Words Are Forced...
... Lyrics Are Iight...
Mic And Voice Presence Is On Point...
... How Old Are You???
You Sound A Lil' Young...
... Like 13 Or 14...
Keep It Up, Boy Boy...
... Stay Up And Strong...

- Jay-O


LOL.. nah yungin.. im older than you.. vocals arnt low either....... good looks

Red Scare 01-12-04 12:52 AM

beat was nice, floh was on lock, topic is kinda played but everything else is nice... overall 7/10

Urban AKA 01-12-04 12:56 AM

I'm listenin right now...

Entrance of the beat is dope... The chorus seems pretty gutter and strong. The first dude kinda sounded like he was struggling a beat and flow was kinda shakey. Other than that, this shit is bumpin as hell. Gotta give you ya props. Lyrics were aight, but overall, this was a straight song..

Peace

PostMan 01-12-04 01:02 AM

^thanks.. flow was no where near shakey tho homie... you gotta check that.

Urban AKA 01-12-04 01:03 AM

I don't mean shaky as in you faulted a lot.. i just mean quite a few pauses and shit.. not that big of a deal.. it's all good homie..

DiSSaster 01-12-04 05:17 AM

you got a nice mic presense, steez is pretty tight
dont normally like the gangsta like ish, but you comin
with it.. flow could be better, but im likin the track in
general..
keep it coming

Abysmal (SoE) 01-12-04 11:55 AM

why is it when every person told u that the flow was rushed shakey or what not witch 3 other people then my self told u that u get all pissed .. u drop tracks for feed back on what u need to improve .. u get pissed cause u only wanna read people suckin u off ..

get over ur self and elavate!

Straie 01-12-04 12:13 PM

nice shit.....I liked the hook........flow was on point.........rode the beat good...........lyrics was tight.........real nice rhyme strucyure.....quality was great as usual....overall real nice track

PostMan 01-12-04 12:21 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Abysmal (SoE)
why is it when every person told u that the flow was rushed shakey or what not witch 3 other people then my self told u that u get all pissed .. u drop tracks for feed back on what u need to improve .. u get pissed cause u only wanna read people suckin u off ..

get over ur self and elavate!


^delete that bullshit.

p.s. i aint gonna elevatin listen to wack ass rappers point out mistakes i can hear myself. i didnt get pissed... i just know you wack and the other niggas who was trying to sound smart were pretty much subpar also.. this is just a net track i dont care.. i do this shit in like 2 takes....... i dont give a fuck..... just online home shit.. i do shit offline so i dont care.. i dont need some half ass emcee pointing out little mistakes that i obviously can hear. YOU NEED ALOT MORE ELEVATIN.. Why you think niggas dont wanna collab wit you???????????????? cuz your whole crew is wack.

Abysmal (SoE) 01-12-04 02:32 PM

what .. collab wit us .. lmao
where did that come from
this site has proven to be quite horribal .. wit it DR and wack audio emcees .. well just mainly ur self and Blunt Cock slobber
or what ever his name is

we have more collabs wit more skilled emcee on one audio page then u and ur whole crew gots tracks .. and if u read ur first post u were sayin .."aint nothing worng wit my track" and now other people say somting u are like .."Its a Net Track"

U Have been sonned
thank u

PostMan 01-12-04 02:36 PM

^thats great now get your wackness out my thread kid.. i dont CARE what you are talking about.

s1iCk 01-15-04 07:27 PM

track was tight.....everyone else already said the hook was dope so u know that....but i do gotta agree wit these cats, ya flow was a lil shaky at times, got a lil off beat but u came back quikk....the beat is fuckin bananas, i was feelin that shit....feelin them multi's towards tha middle of the track too....dope track, stay up...


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