um checked it..and dont see where the hypes at.....you put a muffled effect on your voice....or maybe its your mic...your lyrics need work...just overall need work...

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... And You're A Textcee Wit' Over 1000 Posts...
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... So Its Not A Muffle Effect...
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textcee sorry mayne im audio.....think before you speak.

Right...

well the hook....the words is hot but i aint really feelin how you said it. might be me, i dont really like that slurring shizz. ya bars is hot, yea and you already kno bout ya quality. im feelin ya other tracks too

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Nice Man...

Good Beat...But I Think You Flowed Too Slow For This Type Of Beat...
And Your Voice Wasn't Very Clear...

But You Had Some Sick Lines...Like The Sex With Strangers...Keep Working Man...!

Overall...
8/10

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Yea it was straight probly would of been hard if you did it in da studio but you good peep my tracks at [url]www.soundclick.com/abstractmindzmusic Overall 6out of10

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ya delivery is blah... clean that up... flow isn't that hot... hum... your hat is to big... No 50/50 for you... the you are what you eat line isn't hot... Ride the beat shit... stop fightin it...


and never say Yah'mean again...


deacon said everything else...

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its aiight..i think the flow is ass like a downsyndrom juelz...b/c you shoulda been going fasta on the beat. chorus is catchy..JAY OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO lol illlllllllllll...hot shit duke. bad quality.




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